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Jul
10th
2015

Anyone find these kinks particularly interesting? · 9:35am Jul 10th, 2015

Well I've written a few of these into my stories so far, but I wanted to know what you guys thought about these particular fetishes, that aren't normally tagged, and if you find them as sexy as I do.

-Destroying Clothing
Nothing says a person is going to be naked for a while like this. Anything from outright burning clothes, or simply removing anything and everything they could use to cover their body from the area.

-Recording

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Nov
11th
2016

please answer honestly · 1:34am Nov 11th, 2016

I've noticed that throughout my fic-writing career I haven't really gotten much feedback on anything, with the exception of I Don't Swing that Way. This really shouldn't bother me but it does. I guess I just have a great fear of the unknown.

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Apr
17th
2016

EQD Submission - Good News and Bad News · 9:09pm Apr 17th, 2016

So, I submitted Anima, The Creation of a Princess to EQD, and much like with The Princess and the Seamstress there was nothing wrong with the story itself, but there is one characterization thing I need to fix and a bunch of tonal and grammatical fixes.

As such, those will be coming post-haste (once I get out of the Dark Souls III Abyss, so I'll probably start later tonight.)

Jun
12th
2016

The story behind the story: Lapis and company · 7:28pm Jun 12th, 2016

I was introduced to the Pony side of the world in the fall of 2010, and took to the writing and characters immediately. I was blown away with the intelligence of the storytelling, as "little girls shows" from the past tend to be giggly affairs with lots of pink, frilly dresses, talk about fashion, talk about boyfriends, and other inane things that don't normally keep my attention. As a tomboy from the 80s I watched the cartoons that were more action-packed, like GI Joe, Transformers, M.A.S.K.

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Apr
18th
2018

Divergence - The conclusion to the Crystal Ball Trilogy · 8:19pm Apr 18th, 2018

Hello, everypony! I have an announcement to make. You might already be able to guess what it is!

A great evil is destroyed and its wards are so too. But now a fragment of that evil is on the loose and is unchecked.

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Aug
25th
2017

First blog and story update · 1:43am Aug 25th, 2017

Hey everyone!
To any of you who will actually even read this, just wanting to update you all on my story progress.
Dont worry, nothing too terrible has happened, but a lost a lot of chapter progress thanks to file corruption. Writing has resumed, but for any of you expecting an update very soon may just have to wait a few extra days. I apolagise , but I thank you all for reading so far.
I would love any feedback, good or bad, or just a like and a thumbs up :)
Thanks again

Jul
10th
2015

Will edit/give feedback for free · 6:11am Jul 10th, 2015

I don't come on here often--maybe you can tell because this is my first blog post--but I always find the myriad of stories on here to be daunting. So, instead of looking for stories, how about I just read whatever any one wants to give me and then I'll give them constructive criticism on it. No promises on timelines for reading, as I said I'm rarely ever on so its impossible to tell when I'll actually read the story. Okay, don't know if any one will see this but there you go.

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Nov
7th
2016

I want some feedback on a story idea: · 5:22am Nov 7th, 2016

Now that I no longer have any "crazyfics" that I'm actively working on, I have just come up with an idea:

What if Twilight is sent back in time, and meets Gen-1 ponies?

Based on what I've seen before of gen 1 on Youtube, I'm guessing that it'll be quite a comedic multi-chapter story. :twilightsmile:

Give me some thoughts and opinions in the comments, as well.

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Jan
13th
2022

Poll regarding new story! · 6:05pm Jan 13th, 2022

Happy New Year!

I thought I’d start the year off strong with a self-indulgent fetish fic. Part of me expected the comedy in it to carry it, but it seems like the content alone prevented most people from getting that far.

I’d like to know, though, for those of you that did read it, what did you think?

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May
13th
2021

Was the dialogue in my last chapter good/entertaining? · 3:59am May 13th, 2021

As I said in a pervious blog post, I think of When Traveling in Roam... as the first part of a two-part chapter. However, looking back on it, I am wondering if my decision to publish such a dialogue-heavy chapter without seeking some kind of feedback prior to publishing it was a good decision. If you are following the story and/or enjoy what you have read, could you leave a comment here telling me what about the

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Aug
9th
2015

Feedback - End of Line · 3:07am Aug 9th, 2015

Well, here we are. This is the end of the road for Feedback.

Where to begin? I am assuming that you are reading this coming off of the end of the story. If that is the case, again, you have my sincerest thanks for making it to the end. I certainly hope you enjoyed what you read!

What follows are some accounts on what went into Feedback’s development. Spoilers ahead.

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Jul
5th
2015

Feedback - That continuity · 6:35am Jul 5th, 2015

Today's episode. Amending Fences.

First I would like to say that I absolutely adored today's episode. I mean, besides the Starlight Glimmer cameo at dinner and the unfortunate implications of that (likely for the season finale), everything was just so solid. Moondancer especially was one heck of a foil to Twilight. The supporting characters were great too.

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Jul
13th
2018

I'm bored, so I wanna try something new... · 4:34am Jul 13th, 2018

Since I'm writing so many new ideas and suggestions from my Patrons on Patreon, I wanna know what other things I could branch out with to gain more followers. So because of that, I was wondering... what are your guys' favorite pairings, or themes, or kinks that you like seeing on this site? I might not be open to everything (please note my commission details on my main page for reference), but I wouldn't mind giving my input on what you guys would

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Jun
8th
2015

Negative Feedback · 3:13pm Jun 8th, 2015

So I'm new to this whole FIMfiction site, and I had thought that I could come here for some different feedback on my story Rise of the Republic outside of my small fandom that I've accumulated (And perhaps even enlarge that fanbase a tad), however, the only feedback that I have received so far are 10 thumbs down and two comments, one telling me that my story was incredibly unoriginal, and two that my story description was not properly done.

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Jun
6th
2016

Good News, Everyone! · 5:26pm Jun 6th, 2016

So I just got my feedback on Alicornae back from the pre-reader at EQD, and they said that there's a lot to like and the fixes that need to happen are mostly mechanical, as well as a few blunt phrasing a that need some work. This is the type of feedback that I got from them when writing The Princess and The

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Dec
23rd
2021

yo how's this sounding · 8:17am Dec 23rd, 2021

Spoilers below the break!

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Jan
22nd
2022

Can I Have Feedback on This Story? · 12:57am Jan 22nd, 2022

Rana's Bedtime Story

It's still unfinished, but I still want to know what others think of this story so far, what they like about it, and what needs improving.

Report Heroic412227 · 214 views · #Story #Feedback #OCs #Sonic
Feb
4th
2023

What Has Being a Better Writer Done for You? · 10:02pm Feb 4th, 2023

Hey writers and readers! Max here with a quick query.

I’m putting together some new stuff for LTUE 2023, and that includes redoing some of my old cards. Some of you undoubtedly found your way here or to one of my books because of them, but for those who don’t know, I give out cards with cover images and free samples of the book via a QR code on the back.

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Aug
21st
2015

Feedback - As Seen On Equestria Daily! · 8:51pm Aug 21st, 2015


AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH




I'm not sure what to say. This is a huge honor and I'm so very happy that my story was selected to appear on the blog. ...After a lot of blood, sweat, and tears of course!

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Jun
10th
2018

I like space. · 8:12pm Jun 10th, 2018

I like space. Space is pretty cool. That's why in my previous stories, no matter how unfitting it was for the narrative or theme I often worked some space stuff in there. A mistake. But this is fan fiction. For pastel ponies. Which I was writing with an intentionally silly bent. That made it easy to justify, especialy when my core audience seemed to like the sci-fi elements I'd add into my fantasy worlds the most.

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