Was the dialogue in my last chapter good/entertaining? · 3:59am May 13th, 2021
As I said in a pervious blog post, I think of When Traveling in Roam... as the first part of a two-part chapter. However, looking back on it, I am wondering if my decision to publish such a dialogue-heavy chapter without seeking some kind of feedback prior to publishing it was a good decision. If you are following the story and/or enjoy what you have read, could you leave a comment here telling me what about the dialogue is good and what needs work?
I thought it was very good! No problems here
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Thank you for the feedback! I am happy with what I wrote, I just wanted to get someone else’s opinion on it, a sanity check if you will.