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ShiningBeacon


Character is what you are when no one is watching

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  • 11 weeks
    Interesting times

    It'd be nice if things went smoothly for just a few months. I don't things have been great for me for a longtime now. I'd had hope this year was my year. It is what it is. Just need to buckle down and figure it out.

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  • 96 weeks
    Update on Rules stuff.

    Hello everyone! Hope you all are having a nice day today. I wanted to start by saying just how sorry I am for missing my previous deadline. The last few weeks have been pretty busy for me, and I was aiming to upload chapter 8 right before I left on vacation. As you can see, that didn't happen, but I was able to finish up and get it out, albeit a week later then I intended. I want to promise

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    5 comments · 223 views
  • 99 weeks
    Long time, no see...

    Hey y'all. Just writing this to reassure everyone that Rules for Bodyguards isn't dead and apologize for how long this chapter had taken. Inspiration has been scarce these last months, and I've been pretty unhappy with what I've written till recently. As it stands right now I've got a little over 3000 words in the newest chapter, mostly written in the past week. Seeing how I try very hard not to

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    6 comments · 143 views
  • 130 weeks
    ...Huh

    So I was hanging out in a discord today with a couple of friends (namely Eltirions, The Great Scribbly One, and Big Saij) talking about our stories and just chilling.

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  • 130 weeks
    Ugh...

    I know exactly what I want to write and have no idea how to put it into words.

    0 comments · 105 views
May
13th
2021

Was the dialogue in my last chapter good/entertaining? · 3:59am May 13th, 2021

As I said in a pervious blog post, I think of When Traveling in Roam... as the first part of a two-part chapter. However, looking back on it, I am wondering if my decision to publish such a dialogue-heavy chapter without seeking some kind of feedback prior to publishing it was a good decision. If you are following the story and/or enjoy what you have read, could you leave a comment here telling me what about the dialogue is good and what needs work?

Comments ( 2 )

I thought it was very good! No problems here

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Thank you for the feedback! I am happy with what I wrote, I just wanted to get someone else’s opinion on it, a sanity check if you will.

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