Can I Have Feedback on This Story? · 12:57am Jan 22nd, 2022
It's still unfinished, but I still want to know what others think of this story so far, what they like about it, and what needs improving.
Hi, my name is Heroic412227, but you can call me Heroic. I'm still learning how to be the best writer I can be.
It's still unfinished, but I still want to know what others think of this story so far, what they like about it, and what needs improving.
Please join my group if you need help with your story
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Thanks.
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You're welcome