So, a lot of people unhappy with this chapter, and looking back on it, for good reason.
I know what I was going for with this and the next couple of chapters, and evidently this wasn't the right way of going about it. Let me explain my thought process a little.
Can you feel it? After a near three months of inactivity on this site, it's finally time for me to crawl back from underneath the rock I was sent. There, where I have been working on my stories for the past couple of months (and not having it finished, by the way), have I finally emerged again and I'm ready.
I'm rewriting Pokemon Odyssey. I was rereading it, and I'm not pleased with how I did it.
So yeah, It's going to be rewritten from the ground up.
Things that will stay-
Red and his Pokemon
The gathering of Trainers
Ash and his team meeting Matthew and his group
Pokemon rosters for each of the trainers in Matthew's group.
The villains, Team Nova
The Dimensional Shifter will not be bringing the Trainers to Equis. A different method will.
Notes-
Not really important, especially if you already read through all of my story.
So yeah...I started to take a look at my first chapters and decided to make some changes in terms of grammar.
Chapter one and two were edited multiple times in the past so they should be up to date as good as my skills allow it XP.
Right now, I will focus on season one mainly because season two should be okay.
Of course, if you think otherwise, then please tell me.
So before I got to work in a bit, I wanna try and get this out.
I've been trying to decide on what to do for the rewrite, do you prefer:
(1) That I leave the old chapters on this story and post the new ones either alongside the old chapters (either side by side (a) or separating them with a halfway point (b).)
(a) Prologue old, prologue new, chapter 1 new, chapter 2 new, etc
(b) Old story, separating chapter, new story, etc
OR
I can't hold it off any longer. Today I'm going to begin working on how to completely rewrite Alfreda and Cell's Multiversal Adventure, so incase some people are reading this but haven't read it or Alfreda and Cell's Further Wanderings yet I'll keep them both up until Friday of next week(which the next day coincidentally is when I'm getting on a plane to go hang out with my mom in California) and as soon as I can will begin work on it, merging the latter story into it. As for the poll, simply
The second part of the SAPR Rewrite is now complete, with the Mistral Vacation arc having been rewritten.
With several weeks having passed since the battle at the docks, Ruby joins Sunset, Jaune and Pyrrha on vacation to the historic city of Mistral, where the group makes a mixed impression on Pyrrha's mother, the formidable Lady Nikos.
Hey guys,
Here soon, you'll see some strange activity going on with the Troubled Creature.
what I'm doing is pulling the breaks on the story's progression to rework the current chapters to fix the slew of continuity errors as well adjustments here and there that just kept popping up as I went along with the story.
sorry for the long delay of anything as of late too (since I'm here, I'll just address this):
If you look at SAPR now you will see that the very first chapter - the prologue - now has (Rewritten) against it. That is because, well, it's been rewritten, to tidy a few things up, make it read a little better, and take into account some later developments in the story.
Heeeeey. I don't do these blogs often, but I just wanted to unload some things that happened recently. Some good, some bad. But let's start with the positive, okay? I published a new story last week! The idea that has been bouncing around in my head for years has finally been put to paper, and the first three chapters are up and waiting to be read.
Okay! Bronycon is not far away now, so I should probably post about that (which I will tomorrow or Tuesday). In the interim, I want to be as productive as possible, even if that means channeling Fury Belle.
wait no I changed my mind
Okay, before anyone panic's, just hear me out on this.
As of today, the user Ryvaken, after some discussion, have given me some constructive criticism about the story. You see, he basically pointed out that there were a few plot holes that needed to be fixed, which are:
- There's a lack of emphasis of writing the Tenth symphony and Ludwig's obsession to get home is unrealistic.
Dear Bronies and Pegasisters,
After about a week of going through the entire story, of correcting contradictions, adding new details, sentences and paragraphs while rewriting the other half of the previous chapter, I'm relieved to say that it is done. By tomorrow, I can finally begin to work on the next chapter, that is, unless if Ryvaken has any objections.
Your fellow writer and closeted Brony,
- CrackedInkWell.
IN WHICH I REWRITE A STORY
Here is my usual music video link. It'll make more sense once/if you read the story…
So yeah. Otis Redding and Aria Blaze. If you'll be so kind to click on "Read More", I'll explain.
Current projected release date is Wednesday; just waiting on two more prereads. And in a change, there will NOT be any sex scene in it. In the course of writing this, I realized something I should have long before--sometimes a scene is more powerful without overt sex; sometime’s it’s better if you just leave it in the background undescribed.
I hesisted to make this decision because well, people do seem to like it.
I already wrote this on my the Lineup thingy on my main page, but I doubt people read that as often as they these blog posts, so here goes:
Hey folks!
I'd like to hear your thoughts on the following idea/thought: Should I do a rewrite for my original entry for my story? I feel I could be able to improve upon it. What do you guys think?
I'm planning on rewriting all of my works once I'm finished with writing the official novel of A Wizard's tale and finish helping Mrkillwolf666 with his own coming stories. Of course that would probably mean that I need to both clean out my vaults and have even less time to work on the site I love so much and the various stories needing my attentions thus leading me to put out one last call for adoptions before I go even further down the rabbit hole... red pill is real man.
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