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StrawberryGamer


The real villains were the friends we made along the way.

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In an Equestria that has long forgotten the light of the sun, Summer Star longs to escape the bounds of her planet-bound existence and see the stars up close. When a robotic pony crashes from the sky during a stargazing outing with her friends, she finds that it may hold the key to fulfill her dream. But when the stars start disappearing, Summer discovers the pony also holds an ancient secret that will change Equestria forever.

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Clearly an experienced author. The subtle way in which we are shown important information makes for a smooth opening, for example the street lights and neon signs to confirm that the lack of a sun means eternal night. And this is just one detail about a distinctive new version of future Equestria that intrigues and leaves the reader wanting to know more. The hook is set. Can't wait to see more!

Hmmm, we have a part3pon3, Twi and an Everfree dragon ... :pinkiehappy: :twilightsmile: :moustache:

You know, what Everace said in the last chapter still rings true in my eyes. I’m hooked.

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