So, a lot of people unhappy with this chapter, and looking back on it, for good reason.
I know what I was going for with this and the next couple of chapters, and evidently this wasn't the right way of going about it. Let me explain my thought process a little.
Can you feel it? After a near three months of inactivity on this site, it's finally time for me to crawl back from underneath the rock I was sent. There, where I have been working on my stories for the past couple of months (and not having it finished, by the way), have I finally emerged again and I'm ready.
I'm rewriting Pokemon Odyssey. I was rereading it, and I'm not pleased with how I did it.
So yeah, It's going to be rewritten from the ground up.
Things that will stay-
Red and his Pokemon
The gathering of Trainers
Ash and his team meeting Matthew and his group
Pokemon rosters for each of the trainers in Matthew's group.
The villains, Team Nova
The Dimensional Shifter will not be bringing the Trainers to Equis. A different method will.
Notes-
Not really important, especially if you already read through all of my story.
So yeah...I started to take a look at my first chapters and decided to make some changes in terms of grammar.
Chapter one and two were edited multiple times in the past so they should be up to date as good as my skills allow it XP.
Right now, I will focus on season one mainly because season two should be okay.
Of course, if you think otherwise, then please tell me.
So before I got to work in a bit, I wanna try and get this out.
I've been trying to decide on what to do for the rewrite, do you prefer:
(1) That I leave the old chapters on this story and post the new ones either alongside the old chapters (either side by side (a) or separating them with a halfway point (b).)
(a) Prologue old, prologue new, chapter 1 new, chapter 2 new, etc
(b) Old story, separating chapter, new story, etc
OR
I can't hold it off any longer. Today I'm going to begin working on how to completely rewrite Alfreda and Cell's Multiversal Adventure, so incase some people are reading this but haven't read it or Alfreda and Cell's Further Wanderings yet I'll keep them both up until Friday of next week(which the next day coincidentally is when I'm getting on a plane to go hang out with my mom in California) and as soon as I can will begin work on it, merging the latter story into it. As for the poll, simply
The second part of the SAPR Rewrite is now complete, with the Mistral Vacation arc having been rewritten.
With several weeks having passed since the battle at the docks, Ruby joins Sunset, Jaune and Pyrrha on vacation to the historic city of Mistral, where the group makes a mixed impression on Pyrrha's mother, the formidable Lady Nikos.
Hey guys,
Here soon, you'll see some strange activity going on with the Troubled Creature.
what I'm doing is pulling the breaks on the story's progression to rework the current chapters to fix the slew of continuity errors as well adjustments here and there that just kept popping up as I went along with the story.
sorry for the long delay of anything as of late too (since I'm here, I'll just address this):
If you look at SAPR now you will see that the very first chapter - the prologue - now has (Rewritten) against it. That is because, well, it's been rewritten, to tidy a few things up, make it read a little better, and take into account some later developments in the story.
Heeeeey. I don't do these blogs often, but I just wanted to unload some things that happened recently. Some good, some bad. But let's start with the positive, okay? I published a new story last week! The idea that has been bouncing around in my head for years has finally been put to paper, and the first three chapters are up and waiting to be read.
Alright fackbois, chapters 7 - 9 have been updated and polished. They should look more decent now. Don't expect this to be a daily thing though. I'm doing these at work, and business is slow at the moment. Tomorrow is Monday and throughout the week, I'll be up to my eyeballs in assignments and other things. But hey, during the past week, I was able to polish up and improve the first nine chapters. Feeling really good about these edits. Enjoy guys!
Fixing a punctuation mistake here, rewriting for clarity there, I tend to return from time to time to stories to fix things.
Sometimes I miss things because of the strange mental sequence that causes us all to fill in the gaps because we know what we meant to say. That's why an outside editor is important.
Don't worry, I'm not taking anything down. But I have decided to go in and refine the story's beginning. FTCtH is going to have a rewrite that involves mostly changes to world building and character backgrounds no more shitty world jumping convoluted stuff with Coalback, yay! which basically means that you won't really need to go back and read them. I will take down chapters and post their replacements in their place, chapter number should remain roughly the same. I've also
I am not a terrible writer; there I said it as promised. We hit 100 likes and haven't even gotten 10 dislikes on two separate stories.
So as promised, I am okay *COUGHS HEAVILY!* Good *COUGHS MORE!* at this. There I said it, please can we stop batting me with the news papers?
If they have to continue you can all BITE ME before you slap me with them at least? Make it kinky or something.
Put together a group for all rewrites and fixfics about The Ending of the End and The Last Problem. This isn't only works in a single canon or continuity, but if a shared canon proves popular we might well have to make a folder for it.
EDIT: We hit #2 on Trending!
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