Get a Free Video Review of Your Story!

Long ago, I tried doing free reviews, but nothing came of it because writing reviews is a pain. But doing sloppy video reviews is easy! So, first ten comments (one per person!) get a free short story review. In your comment, please link to the under-3000 word story you want me to review, and give me like a week, and I'll post a video with the review!

Comments

[Flutterpriest]

https://www.fimfiction.net/story/328904/hip-hop-horses

This story clearly doesn't have enough editors or taglines. Let's get it reviewed.

[Orbiting Kettle]

Wohoo! Free stuff!

Anyway, here's my under 3k words story: Princess of the Ruins

[Fedairkid]

Yay, please tell me how much I suck ^^

...no but for real, need all the advice i can get lol

https://www.fimfiction.net/story/395596/one-lazy-morning

[PaulAsaran]

Under 3,000 words? Dude, I don't even know if I'm capable of writing something that small!

Oh, wait. I have Writeoff entries. You can do one of those! I look forward to your sloppy video.

[TheMajorTechie]

Here ya go.

ETwilight's a thief, because who gives a crap about logic?

• MLP: FiM
• Comedy
• Random

Twilight stole a statue and doesn't give a crap about it, 'cause nothing is logical anymore. Rewritten with permission from Evictus' original fic.

• Twilight
• Rarity

TheMajorTechie · 1.9k words  ·  59  5 · 1k views

[Chinchillax]

I think you'd enjoy this story :

Sunset Shimmer the Siren Slayer

[Petrichord]

https://www.fimfiction.net/story/385802/look-what-you-made-me-do This buttfart of a fic should be right up your alley.

[TheMajorTechie]

https://www.fimfiction.net/story/367335/twilights-a-thief-because-who-gives-a-crap-about-logic

My story isn't in the reviews? I already posted an embedded link.

[re- Yamsmos]

>under 3000

You think I'm a fucking normie

[Super Trampoline]

4775183
I only did the first two in that set

[Super Trampoline]

4775210
yes

[re- Yamsmos]

4775284

:c

[TheMajorTechie]

4775283
Oh. Okay. Sorry if I bothered you.

[Super Trampoline]

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[TheMajorTechie]

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I call a meme war.

[Super Trampoline]

4775391
I’m on my phone so it’s a pain to post stuff so you win

[TheMajorTechie]

4775412
Ye.

[Astral Phoenix]

Not exactly under 3000 but if you haven't yet I'd really like to hear your thoughts on my story - My Wings Will Keep You Safe

[Ckat_Myla]

I know it far exceeds the 3k and under cap, but once I have it all done and posted, would you like to be the first to tackle a review of my Sympathy Series as a whole? (Only if you want to,of course. I know it'd be a lot of reading)

[Super Trampoline]

4794723
I have been meaning to sink my teeth into a been Discord story... ( that’s your discord series right? )

[Ckat_Myla]

4794746
Yes, it is. It's been received well but I have been writing it on and off for about seven years so there might be some inconsistencies.

[Bad Horse]

Hmm, I count only 7 so far. But the 2 you just added to your list are fine. I like "The Gathering" better, I think.
Suggestion: If you review "The Gathering", also review Ghost's sequel,
"Carbon, Hydrogen, Oxygen, Nitrogen".
Or review it even if you don't review "The Gathering".

4775391 I think this gave me epilepsy.

[Super Trampoline]

4802637
I have read The Gathering and its sequel before; It's just been a while so I need to reread them.