• Member Since 7th Sep, 2012
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Lolsternater


I'm not Welsh.


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It was just a night for a few beers and the watching of a once-in-a-lifetime meteor shower for farmers/brothers Tom and Taylor. Instead, they find a group of magical ponies and a group of women who seem... very out of place.


Currently unedited.

My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic and all character from the show belong to Hasbro entertainment.
I do not own any of the characters or the show, this is a fan-made story.
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Chapters (5)
Comments ( 19 )

Good one, now I want to see what happens next.

how many storiesdo you have currently runnning now?

i'm willing to give this a shot

Loving this so far :D can't wait for the next chapter

these two have no consideration to eachothers health:rainbowlaugh: that's what makes it hilarious though:pinkiehappy:

this story is good and all, but one thing is bugging me.
knockouts.

why? there's so many. whether it's the group or just one person, there's always someone getting bashed upside the head.

i have no idea what just happened.

Okay this is amazing so far...I mean honestly that bit at the end...Priceless I couldn't stop laughing for 5 minutes. Please keep up the good work :raritystarry:

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Because it's fun. Plus it's a way to hurt people without hurting people in real life who you probably really want to knock out sometimes.

I hate it when I lose my consciences. They're always going off and letting me do silly things. (BTW you misspelled consciousness at the end there.)

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Yea, unedited. I really need to get an editor, but at the rate I write stuff they would have a boring time.

If I saw human shaped anything crawling along like that after mythical creatures fell from the sky I would have grabbed the shotgun.

Made on a whim, huh? I tend to do that more than anything as well. I usually don't release them though... usually.

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Compared to the five month gap between chapters two and three?

Yes, I can say it was. Shall I start on five?

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