• Member Since 7th Sep, 2012
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Lolsternater


I'm not Welsh.

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Behold, the magical kingdom of Dayflow. A place where time itself is kept with the mystic power of the Time Turners, who are safety imprisoned, stuck to do their jobs without their chaos magic. But when a son of discord is teleported right into the heart of this land do things start to go wrong. Chaos is spreading across the land in his wake, and it's up to a group of unlikely hero's to stop him and save their kingdom. But the powers of the past are watching, and slowing gaining power, ready for their escape.

(Big thanks to my co-writers; Spell Bound, Flutterpie-sparkle, and Bookworm. You guys are awesome!)

Chapters (6)
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Comments ( 69 )

"Son of Discord"

"Tragedy and Sad"

"Romance"

THIS CAN ONLY END WELL.

EDIT: Started reading. This... this might actually be good!

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Thank you. Hope you enjoy it!

Just... don't read my other stories...

Yo son of discord here. Lets cause some glorious chaos!!!!!!

I like the characters. Can't wait to see more.
Except.
Spellbound.
Flame.
images.wikia.com/dragonball/images/d/dc/Mr.popo.jpg

1432477 Another TFS reference.
Mr. Popo says;
'Catch you later,
Except,
This season,
You.'

Ooh, interesting story. :pinkiegasp:
I only noticed one error, and it was a period missing.
Other than that, very good.:raritywink:
Moar please? :yay:

1433060 You'll see.
HAHAHAHAHAHA! HAHAHAHAHA!
I ate a man alive today.

Well, all good so far chaps! Google docs anyone?

Btw, does anyone know a good artist who would be willing to make a cover image? Please? Pretty please? Fluttershy please? :fluttershysad:
Yea, I knew you would help... No one says no to a Fluttershy please.

1435251 I might be able to get one of me friends to help. That is if one of them stops beings an idiot.

Only 1000 words? Damn, I'm losing my touch. I promise to bring another 3000 worded chapter next time.

1455265 You better. Foolish child.

1456694 Of course. Don't i always? You know, when im not corrupting your mind so you cant write properly. :pinkiecrazy:

1456796
*Le sigh* You know, when this gets popular and people are going through the comments, they are going to "WTF" a lot.

1456811 Aye, but i care not. I am the son of chaos after all.

I don't feel comfortable to be the co writer, unless I co write something. I will not take a title I don't deserve! So please send me the next chapter so I can finally deserve the name!
Also, Nitro's tail is about a foot long. How does he flick?

He is the son of an evil creature called discord. He’s a draconequus, and the spirit of chaos. (Explain whatever he is here).
(Explain whatever he is here).
you forgot to remove that.
such a silly filly

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Magic!
Oh, and the google doc is aways open. Be sure to visit some time!

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Shut up! I see nothing! LALLALLALLALAAA!!!

1504652 Really? Yippee yi kye yi yippee kye eye oh!

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You: Damn spy's sapping my sentry!
Me: You better deal with that. Don't mind me... (Mwa HAHAHAHAHAA)

1507624 Sentry down! Sigh, better make a new one.

“And with the hum of the breeze and the song of the wild, I go whoop, whoop, whoop!”
Still one of my favourite lines of this chapter

1508697 Respawn.
Dammit. Hmmm.
I know! Equip the Achievement Set! Or as I like to call it,
The Combat Engie Set!
Building a mini sentry!
wiki.teamfortress.com/w/images/e/e5/Gunslinger_1st_person_red.png
Disguised Spy walks in, and the gun is finished.
Time to take out the wrangler!
wiki.teamfortress.com/w/images/b/b7/Wrangler_1st_person_red.png
Aim the laser to the spy and let it rip!
After about ten kills, the Spy finally saps my sentry, after I leave to get more metal. I check my hub, and... what's this? It's gone!
wiki.teamfortress.com/w/images/3/3a/Frontier_Justice_with_Gunslinger_1st_person_red.png
Start praying, boy!

Oh and i've started work on the prequel. The Day Of Red Sky

1572934 waiting for it to be approved now. Plus i have some people on facebook designing a picture for it.

1572934 shared your fic too. Since we last really talked i have become the admin of Rainbow Dash

1572961
Admin? What's that about? The admin of Rainbows facebook?

Edit: wow. That's cool.

Edit again: Wow, someone else just faved this. Thanks MichealRD777!

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I'm not into facebook so I would have no idea about that, but good luck!

Also, I'm taking a quick break off Lands of Time to work on something a bit more silly. Just so I can try using humor better.

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Oh, umm. Just finish that and I'll edit it. In the mean time i will unpublish

Also, you might want to see this link...

BEHOLD! EARILY RELEASED TOO MANY PINKIES!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vURYOPuVFfQ&feature=youtu.be

1631663 you removed the spacing marks between
“Ok....” The mare smiled softly at us all and turned and leads us out of the council. She led us to the Train station, and we waited for the train to Midnight Beach.

and

There was little Mr Flower liked more than making his men pay for the mead at the local bar. However, his curiosity overcame him and he eavesdropped on the ending of the meeting.

it should be

“Ok....” The mare smiled softly at us all and turned and leads us out of the council. She led us to the Train station, and we waited for the train to Midnight Beach.

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There was little Mr Flower liked more than making his men pay for the mead at the local bar. However, his curiosity overcame him and he eavesdropped on the ending of the meeting.

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I... I'm not sure they were there in the first place after editing... Huh... I'll fix that now...

There, all better!

1632771 there we go. now do yourself a favor and listen to Radioactive by Imagine Dragons

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I have nearly all their music already. Radioactive is best combat music, On Top Of The World is best happy music, Cha Ching is best weird but fun music!

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