Salem666
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Insta-fav. This gon' be good.
Well f%^k. A good story if I've ever read one. And I've read a lot of good stories. Let's watch where this goes shall we readers?
okay I absolutely love this. the setting is great, the ponies are who they are supposed to be. and the main six have their history and you even got into little details form them its fantastic.
please keep it up! and if you need help just ask!!
This is relevant to my interests!
you have my attention. So please go on
it tickles my interest...
please continue
Yes! an update! I loved the first chapter! and the 2ed one if great too! I wish it was longer but still.
Its a damned shame this story is not getting more hits. its really well written and nicely detailed.
Please don't stop it. don't cut it short. and please keep up the awesome work!
wow not only is octavia sheltered she is also aparently unable to read people even the slightest. her mother must have really screwed up her mind or something.
Well there we go.
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I do apologize for how short it is XD I wrote it last night at like three thirty in the morning and I was getting to the point where I was drifting forward and forward until I felt like I was gonna pass out on my keyboard XD I'm so glad you like it, and I'm going to do my very best to finish this :D
I'm not exactly sure how it works, but I can see this getting featured at some point.
well frankly i have to say tavi deserved that
so much for making friends with pinkie, when pinkie hears about this, well see pinkiemena's reaction to octavia, can't see AJ responding well too.
I like, and I'm fine with Tavi being brown
I'm really not sure what you're going for here. you've effectively taken away anything that gave Octavia joy or purpose in her life, including her talent. almost seems like she has nothing left. did you really want her to hit rock bottom, this much? when you have no friends, no family, nothing to bring joy to your life, suicide could end up being the only solution left.
Vinyl basically, called out Octavia's snooty behavior, attacked her talent, then walked away. If Vinyl seems to know what Octavia's problem is, why did you have her tell Octavia she deserves to be a miserable pony with nothing to hope for? No empathy at all from Vinyl so far. Does Octavia really look like she's able to reach out to anyone at this point? She may not last much longer without help, so unless you want to add the tags, Sad or Tragic, to your story, I hope the next chapter starts to pull Octavia out of her slump of just living.
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Oh ye of little faith. For Octavia to grow, she must first crumble. You cannot build upon a broken foundation. It will get better, but it won't be easy for her by any means.
Anthro tag has been added if you're interested.
Um...If you don't mind me asking, when will the actual romance be coming in? So far it's just Vinyl pushing Octavia to suicide.
No.
I won't go read another story. I actually really enjoy this one, sorry for being so impatient.
Nobody's perfect.
I can see how you would be annoyed judging by the comment section, but they don't control you.
You write the fucking story, not the comments.
I love this story! its great and fresh! we all want more!
Wise writer says this: Ignore the flames of hate and embrace the love and tolerance. Also where's the "Anthro" tag for this fic?
Something must be done about Octavia's... "Mother." That... pony... is a Grade A+ bitch.
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Fellow brony.
You have no idea how much that comment meant to me. Thank you.
And thank you for not abandoning this story. I really appreciate it.
IT LIVES!
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Sorry. Every time I see a fic you say that on I think of this....
OHH Octavia, Look at you!!!
Waiting it out. Update will come. I know it...
2944636 Hey, um, hi
Just wanted to say that I really really like your story and writing. I randomly decided I wanted to read some TaviScratch and I stumbled upon this gem of a story
Whatever may come, I just thought I'd let you know that the way you write is nothing short of graceful. The words all flow so naturally, the characters are spot on for the setting, and most importantly, everything feels real.
The way all the characters and environments interact and, possibly even better, react, is very realistic and in character.
I think my favourite moment so far was when Vinyl comforted Octavia, chasing away the bad thoughts. I've had a moment like that myself, so maybe it's because I relate, but the scenes where we see Octavia's insecurities, and especially the hug scene, is just... fuzzy. She becomes so much more of a real person because we see her internal struggle and resolution to it.
Thank you for listening to my rant, assuming you got this far
You're a great writer and I can't wait to see where this glorious ship will sail
I patiently await the next chapter of what is probably my favourite story in a long time
Keep chugging on, I believe in you!
Huzza, it's back!
I love the paranoia. Really helps you understand the relationship octavia has with her mother and how abusive she is mentally.
God I love this story. I know bad things will eventually happen but dang it I'm going to enjoy the feels while they last.
Hey salem666 I loving the book but please can you add more chapters it's just getting good with tavi finding her inner sass it's both cute and hilarious
Yours sincerely golden shadow fire