Rarity's Greatest Fantasy
This is based on the My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic cartoon. As everyone knows, I don't own it; Hasbro does.
"No!" said Twilight Sparkle empathetically. "Nix. Nu-uh. Zilch chance!"
"But please, dearie!" said Rarity, her lover since some time back. "This is my greatest fantasy! I've had it since before I met you! Since I was a filly! It was the first thing I thought of the first time I laid eyes on you!"
Twilight winced visibly.
"Thanks, but that just makes me less willing to try this," she said.
"But... why?" said Rarity.
"Because I find that fantasy – no offense – ridiculous and embarrassing, and that it was the first thing you thought of when you saw me the first time does not give me bigger confidence in myself, so to say."
Rarity tilted her head, then leaned close across Twilight's neck.
"Dearest beloved, we have done some fairly embarrassing things already, haven't we?" she purred.
Twilight blushed deeply and began to stammer. "We-well but those... things we-were embarrassing in a go-good way... If I would do what you ask it would make me feel... silly."
"You wouldn't be silly to me," said Rarity. "It would make you even more... attractive and sensual than you already are. It would be deeply arousing..."
She kissed Twilight's ear and the other unicorn flinched a little. "I.. I am so sorry Rarity but... no, I can't."
Rarity pulled back and stared theatrically at her lover. "You don't love me any more, that's it!"
Twilight gasped. "No no I love you, very much, it's just that I..."
Rarity struck her forehead dramatically. "You think I am ugly? Have I become ugly? I must have become ugly!" She began to make weeping noises.
"No no, you look fabulous, you are gorgeous..." Twilight tried to get closer but Rarity pulled away.
"Then... I am becoming fat! I knew it, oh I knew it! Oh, how you must hate this swollen blob of a body..." she wailed.
"NO!" Twilight shouted. "No and you know it!"
"Then you have another! That must be it! I didn't do enough to keep you..." She put her hooves to her face and sobbed.
"Rarity, sweetie..." She pulled away from Twilight again, who suddenly got a wary look in her eyes and pulled back herself.
Rarity uncovered her muzzle and placed her front hooves on Twilight's shoulders. "Who is she? Or is it a he? Were I just... an experiment?"
"Rarity!" Twilight firmly placed Rarity's hooves on the floor. "I know your real melodrama well enough to see through a fake tantrum like this."
Rarity grew silent and looked down into the floor, embarrassed.
Twilight suddenly giggled. "But if you can make yourself totally ridiculous, maybe I can too. Go into the bedroom, I will get ready."
Rarity gasped. "Oh thank you, thank you... you're the best marefriend one could have..."
"Now please go there before I change my mind", Twilight said and shook her head. "I need some preparation for this you know?"
Rarity nodded silently and walked backwards into the bedroom.
Twilight sighed deeply and looked around to see if she could improvise the necessary equipment from Rarity's workroom. She rummaged around and found what she needed.
First, she stood in front of the mirror and, grabbing her mane telekinetically, wound it into a tight knot and secured it with some hairpins and a rubber band. Then she levitated Rarity's old, thin-rimmed glasses onto her muzzle and mused that because of them it would be the first time in the bedroom she wouldn't see a thing. Finally, as she walked towards the bedroom, she started to slap the wooden ruler she had found against her left front thigh experimentally, using her telekinesis.
When she entered the bedroom Rarity had lain down on the floor, shuddering with expectation, her eyes slightly moist, her breath heavy, her cheeks and muzzle flushed. She looked up at Twilight expectantly.
"Miss Rarity!" Twilight said with the sternest, harshest voice she could muster.
"Yes ma'am,", Rarity squeaked, barely able to speak with excitement.
"Are you aware of the penalty for an overdue library book?"
THE END
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*snickers*
I don't know, I rather like it, myself. Rarity would have a naughty side to her, wouldn't you think?
As for feeling silly - Twilight, dear, if she laughs that just means you need to get even more into character.
I'll give you a thumbs-up for doing a good job on writing this, but I'm not sure if I like the idea of Rarity & Twilight getting kinky...
But, that's just my opinion. Good job, kiddo.
Love it. Short and sweet I suppose.
I felt horrible and dirty reading this.
But then, that final line...
I remember reading this awhile back on some other site. I don't think I left a comment on it there, though. I can't really imagine Twilight roleplaying as an angry librarian ready to dole out some sexy punishment, but that almost seems to make it even more awesome.
Are you aware of the penalty for an overdue library book?
ROFL
This made me LOL. :D
AHahah this was awesome! XD
Cute story, but I noticed some editing and word choice problems that kind of threw me for a loop. If you'd like, I can offer my services as a proofreader to help fix them up.
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Sure. English isn't my native language, after all.
Hahahahaha, that's epic. Here I thought, naughty teacher, and it's Librarian.
Why is everypony doing...
continue...
Bwuahaha, YES! This is well put together, has good length / pacing, and an absolutely knockout final line. Thank you.
sometimes bronies forget that this is MY LITTLE PONY. still love it though. >u<
This reads much more like a great joke than a short story.
I love it.
5 stars!
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It is, actually; it is based on a "script" for a comic strip that never materialized (cuz I cant draw ponies), just like A Thousand Year Urge. It would have been three panels had I been a better artist.
And thanks for the kind words.
This is great
the perfect length for something so silly. Not a whole lot of explanation needed, just accept that the two are lovers and go with it. I like it, very humorous, doesn't overstay its welcome, and leaves just enough to the imagination to make it funny without being too... uncomfortable to read. Great job, and as for the grammar and such: for not being a native English speaker i have to say this is nothing less than impressive: I've seen stories with grammar that make this look like a new york times best seller straight from Native speakers. Keep it up!
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The person who wrote Study Buddies likes something I wrote. 
yay!
Thanks for the compliments. I'm especially glad you were satisfied with the length; a lot of people who both liked and disliked this story (or, as I see it, anecdote or skit) wonders where the rest is, so to speak. I also like the part with not much explanation is needed - I feel I tend to over-exposit, which is bad writing IMHO.
The leaving things to the imagination is correct, and I'd like to note that while I have nothing against pure clopfic morally, I don't write it because A, I'm not terribly interested once ponies start "doing" things
and B, because of A I couldn't write it in a way interesting for those who like that sort of thing.
loved this as much as "The thousand year urge"
rofl
It seems so... Obvious, now that I see it.
How come I haven't seen fetishized librarian Twilight before?
Haha, that was fun
Oh my gosh!
That was silly. Twilight the naughty librarian! 
This book is hardly in its original condition, young lady.
Just got home from work decided to read a couple RariLight stories, this one happened to be the next one on my list. Why do I feel the need to comment about that? Because reading that final line after having spent most of the day working at the library was a wonderful combination of surreal and hilarious.
Was expecting a schoolteacher, honestly xD
But librarian makes more sense!