A short story, showing the thoughts of a dying stallion as he's thinking about what he did.
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Kapuchu
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A good write. Love the immersive imagery.
I have a bad habit of skimming, but once I hook into a story... This one really tugs teh strings.
Have a 'stache.
Am I not understanding what literary device was used here or is this some sort of goof?
Either way, great story.
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Think about the thought processes for him... I doubt he's very coherent at that time.
Very good. Nice use of imagery.
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Good point, I hadn't considered that.
How lovely...
I love anything true to the heart and soul, especially when it involves soldiers. The men (or ponies) who go out to fight for our freedom and our rights. The ones who are selfless, and willing to leave their homes and families to sacrifice themselves for the greater good. That question, is the question almost every soldier asks when in combat, or right afterwards. Keep writing and doing what you do.
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u got all the right things down just wow The song is very good too
No idea why this was in the back of my "Read Later" list. But, I finally got to it, and man, that was deep.
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Glad you like it... I'm not quite sure what to think of it now that I think back on it. Far from my best work, but one of the more interesting ones to be sure ^^