Everypony is preparing for the Summer Sun Celebration, until Applejack gets a letter from Princess Twilight stating that Canterlot is under attack once again, and that she needs their help. About this time, Applejack notices that Applebloom is gone!
While all this is happening, a Princess from the Northern Kingdom of Frostmare hears of the chaos in Canterlot, and decides to go assist.
With the Cutie Mark Crusaders leaderless, as well as a new threat threatening all of Equestria, will the main six, with the help of their new friend, be able to defeat the strange new enemy? Will Canterlot, Ponyville, and the Eevrfree Forest become a warzone?
And most of all, will each pony be able to retain their special talents, even without their horns and wings?
ahh... A story. I will return after reading.
~later~
Very interesting intro... i look forward to reading the rest
Oh and i lol'd at Sweetie Bell's older sister thing.
ONWARD!
~more later~
interesting... very interesting.
honestly slightly foggy, but otherwise pretty good. i'd like to see what's goin on with feather.
2272709 The next chapter will hopefully be posted this afternoon.
Glad you like it
Hello, my name is Nickybuttons and I have been on a quest to find the worst OC fic on this site. You will be glad to hear that this fic is much better than many others I'v reviewed. While that is true I would like to point out the conflicting tags (Comedy and Tradgedy do not play well with each other). Aside from that this isnt really a horrible story under any means but it isnt incredibly good. Its just, 'Eh' (especially when compared to some other 'things' I'v reviewed). I must continue my search for the worst OC fic on this site, keep up the writing but try to continue improving. Improvement of your writing and better tagging is what I recommend. You are showing some potential just keep on going.