• Published 9th Mar 2013
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When Ponies Cry - AkemiTheSunbro



Rika is once again reborn, but this isn't the same Hinamizawa that she knows. In fact, it is a totally different town, in a totally different world.

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Broken pieces of time, flying about without a sound.

The light faded. I woke up, and I discovered that I'm lying a hospital bed. Argh! My shoulder hurts... really bad. I lift my arm to feel my shoulder and to my surprise, it's a hand! A human hand! Then it hit me. What just happened... was that all real?

In the next minute, all my friends walk in. Keiichi, Rena, Satoko, Mion and Shion!

Rena was the first to speak, "Oh! You are sooooo cute in that hospital bed! I'm going to take you hooooome!"

Keiichi was next. "Are you alright? You have been in a coma for two weeks! You really shouldn't ride your bike like that!"
Hmm. That's just how long I was in Ponyvile... Is it possible... that I was actually there in Ponyville while in a coma here?

"Maybe." Hanyuu answered my thought.

"Now that you mention it," Rena spoke again. "every night you were in the coma, I had a really strange dream. I was this little pink horse with cotton candy hair, helping out this purple horse with a horn and a blue horse with rainbow hair and wings."

Keiichi lit up. "Me too! Except I was the blue horse you mentioned. I was even helping that purple horse with the horn and the pink horse with the cotton candy hair! What's even stranger, the purple horse called herself 'Rika'. Strange, huh?"

Rena replied, "Oh! I remember that too! That IS strange!"
I smiled at this. I really had been in Ponyville. "Well," I said, "the important thing is that I'm all right and in the company of my friends! Ni-pah!~"

Maybe, Pinkie and Rainbow had believed me when I told them I was Rika was because they were influenced by Keiichi and Rena. But, what happened to them after I killed Nightmare Moon? Is the one known as Twilight Sparkle okay? I guess I can never know.

But now I'm back in Hinamizawa, I must figure out how to survive Miyo Takano...

Comments ( 12 )

2237183 ....Neither... It's a story... for your enjoyment.

I seriously don't see why this story is hated so much. It's pretty good, for MLP and Higurashi. For short, I like this writing. And that's not just because I like the two! (If you saw the picture to the left)

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heh, this is a pretty good story, i don't know why so much little comments.

That was good fic. Not the best one I've ever read, but not that bad. I liked idea of linking "Cupcakes" with this story. Very clever and IMO well thought.

Why is this not in grimdark :rainbowhuh:

5163775 Yeah I know that I'm just saying why don't you put it into more groups? You could get more views to

5165639 I mean, I'm lazy. That's probably a reason. I may sometime at later date though.

5166439 gotcha totally understand :twilightsmile:

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