• Published 28th Jan 2012
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Unicorn Diaries - Sanguinius



Continuation of Preggity wherein Dash and Twilight grow intimately

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Comments ( 11 )

“Now’s a bad time to decide this could be weird.” Ha, loved it

Unicorn Diaries updates make my day.

Damn dude! 16k words?!? You are a typing god! And this story kicks flank!! I freaking love it!! Please don't stop writing! It's so interesting to see how twilight deals with all her emotions with dash. Not to mention the sex is pretty damn good btw.!:twilightblush::rainbowkiss:

Just dropping this note here. I never got into Preggity, 2nd person fics rarely work for me, and I just can't get into 'stuffing' as a fetish. But Unicorn Diaries is such a wonderful fic. I love my clop stories to have romance and conflict, and you sir have delivered. Along with the fabulous Romance Reports this is one of the few truly excelent erotic stories I have read. Keep up the good work, I will await the next chapter with bated breath.

Well, I'm late to the party, but it's curious how you've protrayed Twilight. I would have expected more out of her when interacting with Anon, here. Probably half the scenes have Twilight thinking he's stupid or clumsy or somehow intimidating even though he's soft spoken and she could probably throw him into the next town over with little effort. And the "Eww, I touched a penis" moment had me wincing. She's in a foursome, with a guy. A few touches are pretty much inevitable at some point, there, Twilight. Honestly, she comes across as a teenage girl more than anything in those scenes.

I pull two classes and some ice

Pretty sure you meant glasses.

/subtleresurrectionhint

So i can tell you that people are still reading your stories.... Waiting on the next chapters. Your a amazing writer and im glad to have stumbled upon Preggity (being my favorite) and Unicorn Diaries. Keep up the great work!!! I'll be waiting... ^_^

Please continue!

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