This story is a sequel to Maybe for the...
Part 18 in the Maybe series. As our character and Twilight make there journey back home to Ponyville they find our home sweet home is anything but sweet. And as our main character tries to accept it it will change him for the better...or worst.
To old readers I say this...Enjoy this series end and have fun waiting for the next one. To new readers I suggest going back and starting an an earlier part this way you're not confused.
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Can't wait to read.
two things.
First: I suggest to add an short summary, what happens at the "Last episode of Maybe..." maybe tree or four sentences... or so... there are SO many Maybe... stories on your side already that your readers can easily lost track, what happen the last time ^^"
Second: drunk?... darn... i read to many Fu*ked up stories about MIP FIM lately... I don't even have the slightest idea what happened... darn...
good work again ^^.
Maybe to many paragraphs. A paragraph normally is one Scene or if the Scene is short and the Scene after that is, well, just a slight change of the location, like from the hallway to the room on its end but still its the same situation, you can just let them stick together ^^
But i guess it is more a fimfiction.net problem ^^"
confusion, emotion, description of physical feelings good work ^^
Next task: try to describe a alien sound in an abstract way without using the term "it nearly sounds like" ^^
tehehe ^^
The Herd thing isn't so proper explained. is it some kind of polygamy or some kind of... friends with benefits + children or some kind of... well herd, one male a couple of female, if the female don't want to stick around the male anymore, they just leave?
any ways good again ^^
nothing to say, good work ^^
Sick in the morning? Mood swings? I know know where this is going
. Also, doesn't a ursa major live in that cave!?
Twi's gonna be pissed off.........and I'm gonna be the target she shoots......
waaaaaaait... did twi just send the... 'creature with name I'm always mess up epically' to earth?!
Good work, nothing to say here. ^^
Alert:Magic overload detected, attempting to dump excess magic,please stand by.
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Error:cannot dump excess magic. Unknown magic detected combining with users' magic. Possibility of death:89.3251%
Yeah....Don't like those odds
Good work ^^.
First, short before the end, i thought ow, no not a sad ending, i really can't stand that today, the last story with i read before was so freaking fuc*ed up (in an interesting way) and where so... strange and sickening that i really can't stand it right now... *a couple of seconds later* ... dear god, thank you. ^^
sweet ending ^^
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lol, now the wait until part 19.
Also I think I will post up a blog or something to help people catch up in the story. Thanks for the thought cause I realize it's been 3 months since the first one was posted...might need to let people catch seeing as how there is a new part each week.
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lol, but why is death so high?
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I like that... also Fatty...what did you do to my Twilight?!
Thanks fatty, you took a fun filled day, crushed it, burned it and hade me cry
... don't kill her.
please
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Not just that, didn't Twilight say in a previous chapter something along the lines of, " I have really been craving some sugar-cube corner cupcakes"?
She is having cravings too!!! I am 99.9% sure that she is pregnant.
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Yep same here my friend, same here
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I believe it is high since two different types of magic combining might become unstable,and as we have seen,human magic appears to already be unstable before it might combine or mix with any other magic.
Hey Earth heres the god of chaos and a giant bear made out of constalations
Oh....
Hello Tombstone....
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Neither do I Darknight...
Neither do I.
I know someone who would agree...
Spider-man
"You almost stop breathing as she moves, one thing you have found out in the last few days is that Twilight no longer likes to walk up early"
walk
WALK
REALLY? >:D
If Twilight was pregnant......
Nevermind. I don't want to think about what might have happened to the fetus....
Ya forgot to put a link at the end of part 17 to this one.
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Ya I got lazy. But it's pretty easy to find them seeing as how they are all labeled. ~Sorry, how you enjoy the series though