This story is a sequel to Maybe I could...
This is part 2nd to "Maybe I could". If you want to fully understand the story i suggest you read the first story, it's not to long and it would make this story better but you don't have to I give a short recap in the beginning that may help new readers understand the story. For readers that have read the first story I hope you enjoy part 2, just like before I find it better if you read all the way through. Also like before I will continue to add to the story if i get an overall positive feedback, I am still a new writer and i have used the suggestions i received from my other story for this story, feel free to comment with what you think. (***Chapter 1 is a re-cap***)
Chapters (6)
it should be "our" not "are" and i'll not ill
it's fool not foul
Dafuq? Second part and he dies?
1631305 pony slang for fool is foul
wow well done i rarely read second person fics much less like them so good job
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wow and your only at part 2...I thank you for the complement. You should really enjoy where the series goes if you are liking this part, I did not even know really how to write when I did the first 3 parts. lol
yeah im not even sure how to pronounce that so i would be standing there trying several different versions,
are you new to Ponyville?
hello do you know twilight
MONSTER!!!
well... that escalated quickly...
no...not the food....NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
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lol, also welcome to reading the Maybe series...hope you can get through the first few parts because after that the story picks up.
good luck, your only on part 2
Omg he dies!!!! noooooo!!!!!!
1685831 that would be the funniest thing ever
2160349 but he doesn't know that, right?
I thought the human character was a female?
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Nope, I haven't looks at my first part in about a year.
sorry if that weren't clear.
Technically the series started as a joke and seeing as how it's a 2nd person fic technically it could be a female main character seeing as how it depends on the read. (At least until you get to well...This part and the other 55)
This is so very stream-of-consciousness. I'm enjoying the story, but you could really use a proofreader for grammar and spelling.
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Happy you enjoy it.
Ya this was done over a year ago, newer parts (10-on) have a proof reader and editor.
So...Im rereading. Again!
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woot woot !!!
Not the eg- Wait... It's NOT BOILED? WHAT SORTAWORLDDOESNTEATBOILLEDEGGSFORBREAKFAST
I'm starting to think the main char is narcoleptic...