"This new land of Equestria was supposed to be a land of peace...But what has changed besides the dirt beneath our hooves?" - Star Swirl
The new land of Equestria has been founded, but real peace still lays just out of hoof's reach for the ponies that inhabit this new world. However hope still clings to the land with the Crystal Empire's examples of unity, all that's needed now is push in the right direction from one of the three factions. But the ideas of old may proof to be little more then a bump in the path for King Sombra as the greatest power in the Crystal Empire begins to turn on it's own master.
Based in years before FIM and preceding events in my story The Land Before Us.
Characters updated with chapters.
Chapters (19)
*usual Stuff* *gnarf*
YAY, more to the Land Before series !
yes yes, That was good work. ^^
I will follow this Story with great interest ^^.
ntsh
And beside that ... I'm tired like hell ^^"""
^^ a little crescendo here, good work ^^
That will hold me "Over water" for tomorrow~~~
so and now *strikes super hero pose* TO BED!!!... and tomorrow training... *gnarf*
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lol, I think I win when I get nothing but smiles. For once I didn't do something wrong?
Heck and I don't even have an editor anymore 
wow... short!
Cellies big entrance~~~
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... Well... there is nearly nothing to say~~~...
a little bit more focus on character expression and a bit more scenery description ^^ and done ^^
I mean... 15 Likes and NO dislikes speak for it self, or?
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ya, you beat this level...But you're in the wrong castle. Looks like you have to go to another one
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Hmm. I don't really get why this isn't more popular. I've only just started reading and it seems pretty good so far.
Platinum is a bitch but the other characters seem pretty awesome. I am particularly interested in king Sombra and his 'not-evil-ness'.
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Well thank you, and welcome to the story.
This is it right? This is where it all begins?
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Well that depends what you mean by "This".
If you mean MAybe series and or Land Before series well then yes, this is were it all starts.
Hope you enjoyed it
my opinion of the length of the entirety of the series
i guess i have to start somewhere since i was kinda confused at my last post buuut ill give this series a try
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lol well you did get to the 19th chapter so far. Not bad, here is a Twilight
she eats books, quills and compliments.
Just a wee error but it's pretty close to the start so it may put some people off, I sugest fixing this quickly
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i found a story i was interested in, but i saw it was a sequel, so I went to the next one, to find that it too was a sequel, and the next one, and the next one..... holy hell it was a journey getting here
...now to start reading!
4227687 no, his name is stare swirl, the history books got it wrong