This story is a sequel to Maybe and after all
These are parts 13-15 in the Maybe series, these parts covers events after Maybe and after all. As your journey to Canterlot draws near you find yourself in a situation that may destroy more then just your relationship with Twilight....
To old readers, this is my first time not spacing a story so I hope it's not to much to fast. I look forward to your feedback, and the chapters names will help keep you organized regarding the series.
To new readers, I suggest starting on an easily part, but it's up to you. If you get confused on something take note it was most likely explained before.
Chapters (13)
The plot thickens!
I like the parts as a story.
Moar!
..................I'm dead
.... no .... just no .... no fatty no....
love it
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hey ... you know the red pony with the white and blue hair? ... that me, my OC. kool huh?
*draws a flag with your name on it, and starts to wave it*
Dude... THIS was probably one of 20 best Chapters I have read on FimFictions.org (until now, probably you will surprise me even more later)
Does Spike really use Pinkies "Duh"? What by the way probably in real the Russian word for yes. [Ru <-> Eng; da <-> yes]
It just don't feel like Spike for me, more like Pinkie... or... or did Pinkies posture have 'infected' Spike?! *stupid grinning*
Q: why one of the 20 best and not one of the top 10
A: I don't even know how many Stories i already have read here and i want to be honest ;p ~~~ This Chapter is definitely one of the best i have read here until now.
*starts to digress*
Sadly my Best Chapter was a lil Post in a "Never ending Forum Story" where every one was allowed to post short side stories to progress the great background story... I was even forced to delete my Account there cause I was unable to manage the doxologies for my Chapter... they where so freaking many that in just one hour i got over 300 PM's... and it just don't stopped... ...wait i really digressed!... lol...
P.S. from an Authors point of view, this Chapter was a perfect work, and this is no compliment, it was really masterful and this is the pure truth.
6. recess(?) from below
i recommend to add the commas ^^ they gives it more depths/profoundness(?)
AJ feels a bit... hmpf how to put it... empty... or plain... but well this is also AJ, sometime AJ is just empty and plain in her character *ducks and runs from AJ to safety*
P.S. btw, if i write (?) after a word, it means, I'm not sure it it is the right word... ;p
didn't found some thing here to criticize from mine side. ^^...
May be the punctuation with commas some times in the literal speech, ^^" you can... abuse commas to suggest a little pause in the sentence, cause some time you don't speak in full meaning elements in an sentence, so some time you cancel a part sentence because your interlocutor already knows what you are going to say and to do so is common in literal speech.
example; i will use " | " to show the end of the meaning element. you can use a comma to separate them.
The first | and the last | can be replaced here with a comma. ^^ but don't force to use this concept ^^" only if you feel like it.
P.S. Ok i have decided never again to drink coffee... I only become tired from it these days...
*hits the cash register* "catching!"
A nice and not too complicated twist ^^ good work ^^
That was good... too good X'D
btw.: you forgot the tag 'Sex' ... and i belief you know what i mean ^^ *wink*
also, I have nothing else to say ^^
funny and well chosen words ^^ good work again ^^
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again, nothing to say here ^^
Ya the our was a miss-type it was your. I fixed it now, thx.
and there go's the next super villain.
that will be fun XD
also again nothing to say here from my side ^^
Good story mate.
improvements from chapter to chapter ^^ [yoda]Proud of you I am, Padawan![/yoda]
Dude you are an evil person ^^
I don't know what you are planing, so i can't tell if i found some thing not so matching~~~ ^^"
But to be honest the dispute between Anon and Twi was a bit short ^^"
*bows before you* dear, you have improved your skills quit well since i started to tear your Stories apart *wink* ^^ good work.
And NICE Cliffhanger ^^ super dude really a great work ^^
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So what do you think, chapters of a series or go back to posting 3 parts per series?
2080139 difficult to tell, really... both ways are good, but posting three parts per series, is better for your way of writing, Because every part is like a own little story, telling a bigger story in the background, holding them apart from each other seems to be a more matching decision.
All three parts are in there length very good, but as one Story in one shot they are just too long to read them comfortable in one raw.
P.S. I'm going to tell you a secret about Writers and there way of writing *looks left, looks right, don't sees someone else* *whispers* if you want that your Texts look like a professional writers work, do alway write numbers from including one, to including twelve as the word and not the number, even if it is probably annoying. It gives your writing a sedate feeling, not(!) your Story or the Characters, your writing(!!!). And it is one way to let others belief that you really know what you do~~~ even i some times don't really know what I'm doing but until now nobody ever questioned my way of writing *looks around if somebody else have listened*...
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I think I do a good job doing numbers as words, but sometimes I forget
...#lazy #tired #hungry
And thanks for the feed back on the way it should be posted. I think for parts where it looks better together I will post them together like I did here, for this one I wanted to put 13 as separate and 14&15 together but my editor said:
(editor
) why not post them all together.
then fatty said:
This comment is long....
you're a bad influence. Oh well 
Now I need to figure out how to post 16-19
Great,the captain of the royal guard hates me
.Also,why do I feel like Chrysalis had a backup plan and is about to murder me?
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why.............?Why does this always happen to me?Am I cursed with a bad thread of fate?
It's no where near over.....I think.Wait!Where's Princess Luna?!
*hears a creepy laughter in a mare's voice*
Oh crap!Get the Royal Gua-AGH!
...
I love these stories.
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lol, and ya 16-19 are in the works. they come out in about a week but if I post them together its a week and a half.
Or when ever my editors look over them
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Ha 69
This story is shit, go fucking kill yourself.
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lol jk
I HOPE YOU DIE OF AIDS THOUGH.. QUEER
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Thanks Paul
Twilight walks into the barn....
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Oh sweet Celestia
This is the exact reason I thought rehabilitating Discord in the show was a bad idea
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Did you do like reading suicide or something? lol I looked through the other stories and I saw you commented on like everyone in like one day.
That would make me sick to do that in a day no matter the story.
i think i can see where this is going...
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Well did it go where you thought?
run, run, run, as fast as you can. You can't catch me, because i just used magic even though i'm an earth pony and why is the world so cruel!
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lol, I hope you started at an earlier part. Because if you haven't they you really don't know how cruel the world is.
hmmmm....
Where is Trixie in all this bruhaha
Yes, just some earth pony... That can use magic and has the mind of a human!
hes getting drunk on HnH day? how is that smart? He has plans.