This story is a sequel to Maybes are...
Part 23 in the Maybe series. This part takes place right after the events of Maybes are... After months of worry and hours of uncertainty little Violet is making her way home for the first time. Follow our character as he makes his first stumbling steps into parenthood.
To my old readers, I look to you for the next few parts. Your opinion are going to help mold the story as we near the next split in the story...hope you enjoy. To new readers I suggest starting at an earlier part if you want to better understand the story.
Chapters (5)
Woooo more awesomeness'
YAY!
So ponies, where are the diapers?
POKEMON!!!!!!!!!!!!
I WANNA BE THE VERY BEST! LIKE NO ONE EVER WAS! DUH DUH DUH!
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This is all i can say>
BRAVO
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Another brilliant mess up by Fatty and his team of editing monkeys... lol thanks for pointing it out.
2343774 you took my line
Twilight giggles to Violet as she talks in a low voice, "Hi, are you hungry yet?"
Spike jumps from the staircase as he talks, "No, I already eat."
you mean ate right?
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Like no one ever was
To catch them is my real test
To train them is my cause
gotta love that story line
good job fatty
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yay
very good ... you wonna hear more, talk to me on skype OK.
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I WILL TRAVEL ACROSS THE LAND SEARCHING FAR AND WIDE!
*before read* WOW! I'm late?!... *thump up + fave*
*after read*
nice, ^^ nice story ^^, nicely elaborate storyline. good work. ^^
"Fatty, Hands on the table..." *you do like i told you* *SMAK (Leux used wooden rule; that wasn't very effective...)*
*caught*... ok, to be serious: Look at the beginnings of your paragraphs and say me what stands out there... after that reed the SPOILER PROOF part
Yes... you start nearly all of them with a name or a address(He, She... etc.) that is something you should try to prevent.
I know, to write in second person you need to use quite often addresses(you, yours.. etc.) but it.... hmpf... feels stupid...
you can use it as a specific style element to create a specific feeling in your readers, like to induce tiredness or a lil feeling of stupidity,
but normally its not a so nice habit ^^"
but all in all nice woke ^^
The dialogs are a bit flat, but i guess, thats part of the Style elements you are using, to create the matching feelings of tiredness ^^
Some times some typos and missing commas, where they are needed but nothing to disturbing.
nothing else to say.
YES FINALLY!!! SOME ONE SEES THRU RAINBOWS FACADE!!!... yes, correct, she would be a super awesome mother...
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*Dashs reply toward that ->*
nothing to say I didn't already had said. ^^
good good good ^^, nothing to say ^^
great chapter. keep up the the good work fatty.
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Yep, new one every week.
No quickscopes and no #swag.. 3/10
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That's great. I'll be sure to read the new chapters as they are released.
We have come a far way.......and yet we have a VERY long way to go.
I feel as though somepony just said "a journey begin's with a single step" and forgot to say that the journey was a trillion steps long. Filled with danger and excitement of course!!!
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POKEMON!
Darning Doo?!?!
Celestia damn it!!! *get's up and goes somewhere* I told Daring not to change her name!!! Now we have to rewrite all the books that have her in it!!!!*slams door closed and goes looking for Daring-I mean, Darning Doo.*
Considering that Violet is said to have not cried so far and that she can only produce a wheezing sound when she laughs, would I be correct in guessing that she was born mute?
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That's what I was thinking.
But I would think that if Fatty made her mute that it would make the story to hard to write.
Oh well a story is up like every week and tomorrow is Sunday so...ya.
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You will find your answer in part 24
AWWWWWWWW!!!!
(also nice way to put in a pokemon reference)
WOW!
YOU WENT THERE!
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I WILL TRAVEL CROSS THE LAND!
SEARCHING FAR AND WIDE!
DUH! DUH! DUH!
THESE POKEMON TO UNDERSTAND,
THE POWER THAT'S INSIDE!
POKEMON!
Um, sir, you, um ,misspelled, um, something, um, sir...
2428347 read fatty's bio
2428308 Yes. Yes he did.
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Secrets
wow! Ive only looked at this series once with out starting the first story but after giving it a try by starting the first story I cant stop reading the next story after the next this is going down as the best (and only) fanfiction series I have ever read this author is has earned himself a follow
2428308 ... wow, um......... yea...... spike...... didn't see that coming
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Part 23 gained me a follower