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Extra tags: [Arachnophobia]

Twilight isn't great at dancing. Spike knows it. Her friends know it. Even the poor souls who witnessed it first hoof on her birthday party in Canterlot knows it. But that hasn't stopped her from enjoying herself while "busting a move". So when Twilight receives an invite to a party being hosted by DJ Pon3, she eagerly accepts.

However, she's more than aware that everypony finds her dancing skills lacking. To solve this and impress everypony she decides to do a little research on the subject.

In the end she'll impress everypony alright, and it's not because she studied beforehand either.

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Seem appropriate. And I find it funny because I commented on Twilight's dancing in my story too.

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This requires an arachnophobia tag.

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Thanks. I didn't downvote it. I hope that tag will stop other arachnophobes from doing so. Luna Eclipsed is one of my favorite episodes, but that scene where Luna animates the spiders? That's hard to watch.

Actually, to be fair, I should probably upvote it to counteract some of what it'll get from other people. The writing is fun. +upvote

I upvoted, even though the grammar was killing me and I hate spyders. I just laughed too much not to :)

Fav and upvoted! :twilightsmile:

Too bad there is not a sequel :fluttercry:

2295508 I would, but I got enough on my plate as is. Sorry :fluttershysad:

I have a virulent strain of SUPER-ARACHNOPHOBIA, but armed with the knowledge of what I was getting into, I rather enjoyed this story.:rainbowlaugh:

Bust that Move, Sparky! :facehoof:

Ah, Spiders, amazing animals. Nice little story you have here. Going on my faves. :twilightsmile:

And there I was thinking Twilight had turned herself into a spider and travelled a week back in time again. This was a cute fic, and I liked it!

A couple of grammar and spelling errors though:

"Look out, incoming hot deliciousness," Spike stated as something was placed on the table; behind the open newspaper Twilight held. She folded the newspaper and eyed the steaming pancakes. "They look delicious, Spike. Did you remember-" Two small cups filled with a brown and yellow liquid were placed shortly before she could finish.

Needs a new paragraph for Twilight speaking.

"Um... yes?" Glancing at spike she noticed him giving the 'it's a beautiful sunny day outside why are you wasting it' look.

Spike should be capitalised.

And that's all. Literally a couple!

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