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Luna discovers the simple wonders of a peanut butter and jelly sandwich, which leads to a small rivalry between the two Princesses.

Rated teen for "Implied suggestive" content. (Just in case)

(Also: Title renamed for the sake of submitting it to "ponies doing things" group.)

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 21 )

Short story? Check
Silly/Joke-y subject? Check
Alicorn princesses? Check

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You forgot to add an end to the italics.

Very funny and entertaining.

But why is everything in italics about a third of the way through? :applejackunsure:

Never mind, stealth edit while I was reading.

1363759 I can only hope :pinkiesad2:

1363889 Thank you so much :heart:

1363920 Jphyper was nice enough to point it out. It should be fixed now :twilightsmile:

This is a very short but very interesting story!
I always love the comedy about Luna versus Tia in a hilarious way.
GJ!

Ahahahahahahahaha :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:
I loved this story good job :pinkiehappy:

Delightful--I literally laughed out loud!

"We thank thee butter Croissant!" She continued to hug the poor mare as she drape her across her shoulder.

*Butter

*draped

Overall, 3 out of 5 Trixies :trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftleft:

I find this one to be one of the more silly stories that have been made here. Luna vs Celestia over PB&J? Priceless. :pinkiehappy:

1364772>>1364631 Thank you both. Feel rather foalish for not catching those, even after using a spell check :twilightblush:

Milk form Denmilk? I don't know about you, but I always order my milk from Wiscownsin. Tastes fuller and creamier, to me anyway. Great cheese too.

Hahahaha oh god :rainbowlaugh:

'Equestria at a stand still as peanuts reign supreme! What you should know about our new legume overlords.'
:rainbowlaugh: epic

That was great, nice fun story. :rainbowdetermined2:

Dearest Tia,
Revenge is best served stuck to the roof of your mouth.

I see what you did there...

I would consider replacing "stores" with "food banks" at the very end.

HAHAHA funny story. Luna such a troll! :pinkiehappy:

I reviewed your story tonight you can find it here

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