What a little object is to most ponies...can mean so much to just one
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(btw it is appaloosa not Appalusa.) It's an actual horse breed
That, just that. It was sad, but It made me smile a little. I know stories like this have probably already been made, but who cares. This story is full of feels.
You should probably go back and fix a few errors. You should have gotten it looked at, because there are more than a few grammatical tics that need a fixin'. Any way, I like the story.
dawwwww
Though I always figured Apple Bloom for some sort of a crafts pony.
I like to think her cutie mark will be a paintbrush painting a picture of an apple flower, but that's just my guess.
So... much... daawwwwwwwwwww
Short and sweet and very well done
A beautiful story!!
Has some grammar mistakes though, but not too much, so its still wonderfull.
Not bad although Apple Bloom's cutie mark doesn't really match with what we know she's good at (She's good at wood working and art).
And there are some grammar errors including the misspelling of Appleloosa.
Awwwwwww.So Sweet Ending. I Gots DemFeels XD.
beautiful story!!! best ending iv read really was a tear jerkier and i think i found an awesome song to listen to while reading this 1 airplanes by b.o.b
cant wait to read the next chapter!!
2061460 It's a one chapter story. But I thank you for the comment
What the f***!? How is this story doing this well!? It's not even good! I just wrote it based of a picture. D***. Thank you guys so much
A couple of corrections:
The wood had started to decay.
You generally want to avoid using I in narration, as the narrator is not supposed to be an actual person per se.
I think you just called Scoots an "it" at the beginning of this sentence.
She did the entire event faster than any filly has ever done it in the past.
There were some more missing words and wrong words spread throughout it but all in all, not half bad.
Alright, who's the dude that disliked this!?
He was the founder of Equestrian Bronies and you dare give his story a thumbs down!?1?!?
This story made me feel peaceful inside
I’m definitely liking it.
DID SOMEBODY SAY CRUSADE? Jokes aside, good job. You really made me feel it... in the feels. It made me remember some fond and not so found memories of my own friendships that have matured through time.