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When Twilight gets a strange letter from Princess Celestia of "urgent matters", she is summoned to Canterlot. However, she discovers what is truly happening when the unicorn meets the princess. Soon, her destiny is chosen and her life is supposed to be forever changed... but... some complications arise.

Perhaps her life changed for the better.

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One-shot co-written with GoldenEagle159. Give him cookies and shit.

>tfw diabeetus

Edit: Dis post numba. Quads check 'em.

2050000
I made sure they were sugar-free, lactose-free, dairy-free, and fun-free.

2050008 NO FUN ALLOWED

>tfw it still has carbs and will kill me

That...
It wasn't exactly beautiful...
It wasn't what the bronies deserved
It was what the bronies needed.

Ok, I'm going to explain briefly about what has been going on in my mind I'm the past minute or so,

At first I was like, :pinkiegasp: Twilight died!?!?! :raritycry: but then I was like, "Author you lier I thought Twilight was supposed to turn into a alicorn!" :flutterrage: but then I realization hit me,"maybe Twilight turned into Celestial!":rainbowderp: "or maybe Celestial absorbed twilight into her body!":pinkiesick:
Then I decided to post this comment, just in case I missed anything. Then someone would tell me what I missed! I then nod to myself and posted this comment...

P.S. -my last comment was made by pure boredom, as this one as well.

2050636 No, she died. You didn't miss anything.

Though, as said in the author's notes, we might do something like an alternate ending, assuming we consider this the 'real' ending. We may or may not do anything, though.

2050636
She died.

If you dislike the story, please feel free to tell me why - I'm always looking to improve. :twilightsmile:

I'll check it out later. :moustache: Could you please read my stories?

2050935
Why did she die!? She was meant to turn into a Alicorn!? :applecry:

2053989
The insinuation was that she turned into an alicorn in her imagination, assuming that her death was part of the transformation.

Also, I find it slightly prejudiced that you dislike just because of subject matter rather than execution. :u

2050935
>tfw you don't care that I helped write this

;_;

I am starting to see alot of ' saids ' but I can live with that.

---J.

No. Do not edit a thing. This is perfect exactly as it is.

2058352
If you're being honest, thanks so much! It means quite a lot.

2058382
Angus T. Jones approves, apparently

XiF

2050935 iz bcz u iz teh sux0rz

This is a very good story! The plot is slightly overused, but you described the moments like a plot would go for a real episode. Though, note, they would use it like this:
(Name): "(speech)"
(Actions or emotions)
But otherwise, a wonderful story!

2125147 You can't write stories like that, you know. It's against the story rules.

2075988 nein du

2052321

You know, most people don't like them and to be honest, advertising like that annoys most people.

2050657

You have the same avatar as me... Time to change it soon...

2311133
Not only is it annoying, it falls within the rule violation of Spam.

2311133, lol really? In that case, I already have my new avatar. You can keep yours, I think I would be more comfortable if I knew the avatar I was using was of my own work...

P.N. -I'm going to change it on Monday, due to me going somewhere far-far away from my computer tomorrow. Don't worry though, I will change it on Monday, I pinkie promise.:twilightsmile:

2050894, so... she died? As in Celestia called her all the way to canterlot just to get blasted into nothingness? Or was there a strange backstory for this that you didn't mention to anyone... but yourself:rainbowderp:

P.S -lol its been 7 weeks since I've last looked at this story. Its also been 7 weeks since I got addicted to reading the stories on this site and posted that weird caffeine-fueled comment. Strange how I come back to this story just to reply to a dude, who coincidentally had the same avatar as me. :twilightsheepish:

2311204

Well, I could change it anyways too.

Because I have a lot of snips that I could be using for Fimfiction.

2311256
It was an accident.

2313765 Thats it? An accident killed Twilight then "The End".Not to be mean but pretty pathetic at least say in a different chapter what happened to her friends :applejackunsure: Or are you going to be a :trollestia: if you are :facehoof:

Incredible how you predicted the season 9 opener six years in advance

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