I prefer writing and reading original stuff, with a sinful taste to abnormality, darling. 
Inspired by the Nine Inch Nails-Right Where It Belongs
This was also done in thirty minutes. Anyway, MLP is owned by Hasbro and Lauren Faust, the song that I was inspired by to write this belongs to Nine Inch Nails.
The pony in this short story is Anonymous, meaning the pony has no imprinted name. The pony is questioning the world he lives in. It may seem quite vague, but I recommend you read along the story and figure out what the pony is talking about.
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This was for confusing then your black match fic, but I finally understood it on my third read through.
Lot's of typos, tense errors and what have you. It's spelled Sombra.
Oh and center justification is terrible.
3329337 Let me guess, I spelled Sombre instead of Sombra, eh?
Meh, I honestly had no clue what the hell I was thinking about when I was typing this. Oh well, it did not matter to me then and now. If it entertains someone in some way, it accomplished something, if it just made others back away, oh well.
Thank you for your, short (not trying to be rude muck here), criticism. Such old work can be toss to the side by new work.
3330237oh I'm not offended, surprised you aren't either.
3330570Hehhe,
I am never offended by comments with critique value or not. After all, they are other people's opinions that I respect fairly with many others. Again, thank you for the criticism.
It's motivation for me to do better and work harder on my grammar and punctuation skills. Still a novice, but I will someday be perfected at and not have to get some friend to edit it.