In a post-war Equestria, we listen in on the thoughts of a pony near the brink of sanity.
This is a very short story I wrote up in class one day while I was depressed. It only references MLP once, but I thought I would post it to see if anypony even liked my writing. This is my first submission, and I will warn you now it is a bit sad.
Cliche. All I can say.
145584 well it was written in like ten minutes so... oh well. It is far from my best work, but I wanted to post something pony-related.
145614 Don't get me wrong. Your writing style is quite promising and I will be glad to read your future works.
145675 I plan on writing more! This was just an idea I got during downtime in school.
However, I'm glad for any sort of criticism, because, how will I get better if nobody tells me whats wrong?