It's business as usual for the Dusty Bolts taking on more work than they can handle, kicking flank, and breaking mare's hearts, some things never change. This is the sequel of Flying with the Dusty Bolts, if you haven't read that yet this story will make little sense.
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Oh Yea! Just got back and I'm about to start reading, been anticipating this!dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Fluttershy_lolface.png
So, Yea! I read this, and it's all I could have asked for. There's not really many problems except that every now and then there were a few Grammar probs and you putting Mirages' name in his place, I understand it either way knowing that you're still used to having Mirage as your main Character though. Like how it seems to be going on, and noticed that you're trying the whole Romance tag out, wish you luck in that genre my man.
1874713 Sharp eye, thanks for the head up, I thought it was good to go but then again I was in a rush to publish something. Probably working on too many stories lately, getting too in depth and over thinking everything. I will say the epilogue for Flying with the Dusty Bolts will be worth the wait if I can ever finish it. As far as the romance tag, I hate to admit it but it's addicting my writing for it is getting better but I want my stories to have more depth to them. It's good to see my stories are getting more views sooner than they used to more feedback would be nice but I'll settle for views for now. As always mohalo plenty!
1916119 Arigato gozaimasu, big plans are in store for the township of Appaloosa but these first few chapters are going to be a bit of catch up with the new joins from the last story so I can cool my jets for a bit. This chapter was a lot of fun to write glad you enjoyed it. By the way, thought you might want to know, did some rewriting on the opening chapter of Flying with the Dusty Bolts. Nothing major, most of the changes are thanks to a review by Bad Horse. Couldn't change it as much as he wanted without taking away from what I wanted for the story but I think it made it better. Considering joining a pre-reading group if they'd be able to help out with quality control.
Ah, I liked this chapter, a returning story, now that brings interest to me. I believe many have a clue on who the "Mystery Flyer" is.