Sonata’s Solo

After the catastrophic Canterlot High Battle of the Bands Sonata Dusk is abandoned by her fellow Dazzlings. How will she survive High School alone?

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Exit Stage Left · 14th Jan 2015 · 1,102 words
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First Impressions are the Worst · 24th Jan 2015 · 1,177 words
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A Battle for Breakfast · 29th Jan 2015 · 1,254 words
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Basket Balls and Model Planes · 22nd Apr 2015 · 1,163 words
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Evil HERO Malicious Bane

Evil HERO Malicious Bane #1 · Jan 14th, 2015 · · · Exit Stage Left ·

Nice start.

Shadowmane PX-41

Shadowmane PX-41 #2 · Jan 14th, 2015 · · · Exit Stage Left ·

A lot of full stops are missing, but overall, this whole "Sonata being kicked from the group" thing has been done to death already.

Now while I don't wish for you to stop this story, it is a rather light-hearted take on the whole gimmick. At least this time, Adagio and Aria kept their cool whilst giving Sonata the boot.

I will try reading more chapters when they come out.

Keep up the good work.

-Shadowmane

Pony Bones

Pony Bones #3 · Jan 15th, 2015 · · · Exit Stage Left ·

5503433 Shoot, I've been beat to the punch. That's what I get for waiting till the movie comes out on Netflix. Inspiration can be a pain when someone's already done it, oh well I'm only writing because I've got to get this story out. Can't say that I've seen any of the other stories along the same plot line, so everything in this story will be guaranteed 100% Pony Bones. Also thank you for being objective, it's refreshing.

MythrilMoth

MythrilMoth #4 · Jan 17th, 2015 · · · Exit Stage Left ·

You need to work on punctuation. You also need to work on run-on sentences. You have serious problems with both of these things, and they're going to turn away readers.

Pony Bones

Pony Bones #5 · Jan 17th, 2015 · · · Exit Stage Left ·

5514030 I know

Tennis Match Fan

Tennis Match Fan #6 · Jan 24th, 2015 · · · First Impressions are the Worst ·

Thankfully most of the glances in her direction were looks of disinterest and not hostility. Sonata hoped that she had at least one class with
that klutzy girl, she seemed like she could be a great friend.

You accidentally split that sentence.

“Yes.” Sonata replied, nothing against Counselor Cadence she had been more than friendly.

"Yes," Sonata replied. She had nothing against Counselor Cadence, who had been more than friendly.

Pony Bones

Pony Bones #7 · Jan 24th, 2015 · · · First Impressions are the Worst ·

5545026 Thanks a whole heap for pointing that out. I really do want to see this story improved, your assistance is appreciated.

CassandraMyOCisBestpony

CassandraMyOCisBestpony #8 · Jan 28th, 2015 · · · First Impressions are the Worst ·

Can't you use Google Drive if you computer keeps crashing? Autosave is a godsend - I mean, Faust-send,

Pony Bones

Pony Bones #9 · Jan 28th, 2015 · · · First Impressions are the Worst ·

5558859 I really should, my word processor has auto save but for some reason it failed. Time to junk my typewriter and move into the digital age, eyup.