This was a small fic about Fluttershy being in love with Big Mac just like all the others. I decided to write up after watching MyPoniator's video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=_VlJGjWZhi8
Needless to say, it's not serious. It really isn't.
It isn't... D:
Edit: PEOPLE THINK THIS IS SERIOUS! OH MY SIDES ARE GONE! THE HILARITY IS TOO MUCH!
What does Meta mean, people?
I should correct that youtube video as the source for this ridiculousness. Here's the original fanfic: http://mikey1000.deviantart.com/art/fluttermac-fanfic-1-311311064
Chapters (1)
Wow
A review:
Length:
Reading this took me under a minute. So length isn't that big, which is one thing most stories need. so X on length.
The Story:
The set up was alright, but the story itself was lacking. Also, a thing I want to point out:
" They knew that each other would never give one another up. They would never let each other down. Big mac would never run around and desert her. He would never make her cry, or say goodbye. He would never tell a lie and hurt her."
Unoriginal Much? Anyways, this gets a X.
Romance.
X-. There's 1 paragraph of romance, and that's it.
Overall: 1/10, or X. This REALLY NEED ALOT of work for it to become a better fic.
Also I'm disliking.
Here before Nunchucks and Regidar
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Under a minute?! Geez, it takes me 3 minutes to read this length- and that was through skimming!
Took me about fifteen to thirty seconds myself.It was a solid meh. Or, as Lrrr, ruler of the planet Omicron Perseii 8 would put it: "thus we award you program a C-. Not especially bad, but also not all that great."
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That. Was. Crap.
Just getting to the point without any distractions.
Your description is supposed to reveal details about the story, akin to -no, a synonym for - a synopsis. Your description just says "dis b bazd of anudder fic LOLLLLLL!"
Oh hey, a Fluttermac fic. Time to read!
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No.
(Joke) Alt. Title: LMayo's Epic Yarn and Crap Effect
What's with all the negativity? I found this little short amusing enough.
Probably helps to have seen the actual video...
The slipping in of Rick at the end was just perfect.
It was..........okay
Yuck...
Pretty shitty, to say the least.
Offensive to my shipping!
Just kidding IDGAF. Abstained from jusgement.
I see what you did there... after a while, it was kinda obvious it wasn't meant to be taken serious. Especially after the practical rick rolling.
My opinion? I like what you did. Kinda. I don't see why people took this so seriously though. Parodies are nice. ...This was a parody of sorts, right?
I myself think FlutterSoarin' would be a nicer couple. FlutterMac is either too similiar (
) Or too... out of place. I'm only here because I was wondering why a nonserious was being serioused.
So um... yes. Keep at it, Author. I'll give a... 6/10.
... At least SOMEONE got it!
Upon reading the above comments apparently nopony has seen the video of this on youtube already :P also there are 2 other chapters of this tale to be found on dA
Still a better lov-
(Dido was too lazy to write the rest of the joke).