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Silence

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Soul Mare had a few tragic things happen to her, and its killing her on the inside, but she is too kind to tell anyone how she feels. Slowly... she begins to go insane. Nopony knows what to do until its too late..

Chapters (4)

The Beginning · 12th Dec 2012 · 940 words
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Dying · 13th Dec 2012 · 1,133 words
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Better this Way? · 16th Dec 2012 · 871 words
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Calming · 17th Dec 2012 · 975 words
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Regidar

Regidar #1 · Dec 12th, 2012 · · · Dying ·

Self-insert?
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Sorren

Sorren #2 · Dec 12th, 2012 · · · The Beginning ·

pretty good. One small issue. You only start the next sentence after quotations with a lowercase if it's a modification of the quotations. Something like 'she said', would be lowercased. Something like. ' "No." She trotted to the corner of the room. ', would not be. See what I mean?

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