Private Investigator from Chicago transported to Equestria by means unknown. Just trying to survive as the only Human around.
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Kinky.
Hot.
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I'm a big fan of sex without intercourse. Expect more in the next chapters when I get around to them.
Alrighty then, let's see where this goes
I like it a lot... but the tenses bother me... for example
"and when she would come down towards his balls she’d moan a bit"
sounds awkward, I don't think you're supposed to use "would." Would is the conditional tense (i think), not past.
It still works, it just bothers me.
Still very good.
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I'll work on that. This isn't my first rodeo but it is my first clop fic.
For a very first clop fic its pretty well written
P.s. Maybe you can read my story called my day in ponyville
E-E-Excuse me while I now try and go eat dinner with an erection
atta boy Braeburn x3 just give your sister's friends her package..... you naughty post pony you......