Jimmy and George are 2 average high school students. They have also been friends since they were small children. One day they both end up in the world of Equestria. Normally this would be a dream come true for any brony, but not all is well when they arrive. Strange things have been happening across Equestria, and many people take notice that there are now 2 humans in their world, an event that has not happened for 1000 years. Soon, many people begin to accuse the 2 of being a part of all the disasters. Similar disasters that happened right before 3 great events that changed everything so long ago. Now the 2 friends must face 2 challenges: Finding a way home, and learning who they can and can't trust.
Rated Teen for some violence that may emerge in future chapters.
First story so please don't be mad if it's not all that good :3
Hey great story and maybe a bit more details but over all pretty well written. Maybe you can read mine, it's called my day in ponyville. It's a bit like yours but only a bit and I didn't copy after I was browsing and reading yours it sounded like mine. I pinkie promise I didn't copy
I'm actually pretty excited to see how this will continue
I can only imagine the situations you will put me in 
"Now the 2 friends must face 2 challenges" Style guides generally recommend that you write out single-digit numbers.
"learning who they can't and can't trust" How pessimistic.
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You seem to be a very nagative pony...
uggg more chapters stop the cliff hangers
Glorious!
Whoa! Getting exciting now
This is an amazing chapter! I like how you described how you and your friends reacted to being in Equestria.
I give you 5/5 spikes
Thanks everyone :D Long story short, I've been busy with school. But now that it's break time I'm gonna write the next chapter. xRez (George)'s birthday is tomorrow so we're hanging out, once I come back (If I'm not tired) I'll write the next chapter. If I don't, next day for sure :D Happy holidays everyone
Nice Chapter! Please make more of them soon.
Can you believe I'm only just now reading this story now? XD Good lord that's an old habit I need to break. Anyway, I'm enjoying the story so far~ I generally find the idea of human beings in Equestria interesting, especially considering how good us humans are at fucking things up! (i.e. destroying things, killing things, yadda yadda yadda) I learned a few things from this story, too~ (like how George has glasses, as do I xD)
Ya know, I've always had similar ideas in regards to the dark influence that corrupted N.M., Discord and Sombra (Except maybe the humans thing) Great minds think alike, I guess? (Or at least "Strange minds" XD)
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Seems like it XD
Well, I am certainly liking ths story more and more.
Just started reading it today actually.
Can't wait to see what you do next with this!
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and I've already got plenty of ideas for it. I'm always writing outlines for chapters even before I actually type the one before 
Thanks for the favorite ^.^
Thanks
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Your process of writing sounds similar to mine. Except I end up writing like 12 pages for just one chapter. I overdue things a bit. But yea, story's great and everything!
Oh, and you're welcome.
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I try to end all my chapters with a cliffhanger or twist so I have to plan it out lol
I have that same problem
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Well, the cliffhangers you're doing good so far with. Keep iyt up, will ya?!
Happy prelated birthday Jim~
(The ending was rather abrupt in its dark epiphany. But I did like the comparison between Sombra and the Black Death :3)
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I wanted to wait a while more and mention it, but I decided before I go on a long break I should reveal that one cliffhanger.
Thanks Nick
At first, I was wondering why my story ended up here, but then I realized that this isn't my story.
Carry on.