When Daigo finds himself on a new world, he decides to teach Big Mac how to play his favorite game.
Based off an idea I got watching Cardfight Vanguard episode 83
Thanks to viperxix for proofreading.
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Spoiler alert: Daigo vanishes in thin air.
FINAL TURN!
Big Mac makes a pony Version of Cardfight Vanguard... Sweet. Though it was a little hard to follow for a bit, especially if someone is new to the game, you could do with a score counter like so:
Big Mac: 5 Damage
Daigo: 4 Damage
But that's just me. Another thing I had a problem with is that While Daigo used some of the Royal Paladins that you had him use, He never used Alfred the King of Knights or Blaster Blade from what I remember. Though then again I could be wrong. A for effort and everything though.
You just activated Big Macs trap card.
Lol I have no idea how any card game works.
1711398
thats ok, i'd be more curious what you thought of the rest of the story. The card game part I wouldn't mind if people just skimmed over.
1711409
Can't offer much advice, seeing as how I'm just a hack with a keyboard.
Your paragraphs have a bit too much space between them, imo.
1711428
(consider ashamed rather than sleepy) Didn't go through and get out all the extra space like usual when I transfer over from docs. I thought it didn't look so bad for this story but guess not since you noticed it, my bad I won't be so lazy in the future.
That was...surreal. None of the characters were all that disturbed by being a fish out of water, although the bit about war was nice
. I don't play this card game so I won't judge that part. The whole thing felt a bit contrived in order to play a card game. Technically speaking your writing is very good, although as naruoC said the spacing was a bit much.
This was... a trip.
1711559
yeah definitely not my best work, actually I wrote this one cause the idea wouldn't leave me alone and was interfering with writing my other projects.
If people like this that's cool, if not that's ok too, all that matters to me is since I got this out of the way I've made real progress on my true projects.
shit, regidar reads them all...
also srry bout the fic mate, better luck on your other works
1711711
thanks, no worries, this was a write on a whim fic. The ones after it will be the ones I've been working hard on.
I'll stick with MtG.
1718839
another excellent card game and still the one I play most
ok... I love Vanguard, I play Great Nature and Nova myself, but... my god this was a hard read... it felt like I was reading the rule book and then the rule book started to cardfight another CFV rulebook, I don't know how you could have done this any better at all but hey, I throw in extra points for being the only CFV fic on the site, good job, I guess
4-10
1711098
since it's a crossover, using characters from the anime also comes with some slight continuity rules from the anime itself, purely for the story's sake (in the anime) cards from the Gancealot, Alfred and Blaster series are reserved for only two characters, Ren Suzugamori and Aichi Sendou.