The Grimm Reaper is the writer of the 'Darkness Duology', 'Immortal', 'They Come at Night... Mostly!' and 'Only Bone Deep'. Among others.
Twilight Sparkle is investigating some old catacombs when a letter arrives from Princess Luna. It depicts a memory she had forgotten and research into it revealed that 'The Ancients' had made it to the moon without the use of magic. Luna was putting a team together to go and excavate the ruins she'd seen during her thousand year exile. What they find there may be more than they hoped for.
Rated Teen for gore and language.
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I like it
Need more, although I wouldn't mind longer chapters
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whens this getting updated man? I need more...MOAR!!!!?!!!
Very nice. You have peaked my intrest
. But there are some errors with the german sentences.
I have some suggestions here how you could it make better:
It should be "Sonneneruption steht unmittelbar bevor! Sofort evakuieren"
The "in" makes it sound like the shield are aktiv in the country itself and i'm guessing that the shields are supposed to be over those places, thus "Schutzschilde aktiviert über:" would be better.
I think your looking for "Aufwachsequenz eingestellt für", though i must admit i'm not sure myself. And german is supposed to be my native language
I hope it will help. Sorry if I sounded like a grammer nazi
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2666600 Actually, I was hoping someone like you would come along. I'm looking for a translater. You interested?
Great story, I'd recommend getting an editor though.
Fuck yes, MOAR!
Keep being Awesome!
Sounds like the Sonic The Hedgehog comics because Earth and Möbius use to be one world until they split into 2 sperate worlds.