• Member Since 2nd Sep, 2012
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Sneaky


What to do with my life now

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Celestia finds love in the arms of a stallion, and are bound together prematurely but strongly.

My entry for the MLP Forums Unofficial Fanfic Contest! Hopefully it will be accepted!
Update: Didn't make it into the finals because I went over the character limit ); Oh well I enjoyed making the story anyways.

Thanks to Mr.RealityTheBrony for proofreading!

(One of my much older stories, if you're looking for quality then I wouldn't look here.)

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 12 )

I felt this was kind of rushed. Feel free to express your comments, thoughts, criticism, etc...

Not a lot of fish in the sea that won't, you know, die.

There's a mad sadistic chaos god and then there's her own sister. Shit, Celestia's personal life looks bleaker the more you think about it. So much fridge horror, it's a wonder she's even functional.

Manly tears they have been shed.

This is quiet lovely, loved it.

Just not sure if the "I ain't even mad" as a meme or just because you thought it would fit? :rainbowwild::rainbowlaugh:

1599577 Hah yeah I used the meme. It was in the back of my mind, and then when I saw an opportunity, I jumped on it.

Glad you all enjoyed, please wish me luck in the contest! :twilightsheepish:

1700892 Thanks for outlining and reviewing everything for me. Haha I didn't even know it was comedic, but it's not like that's a bad thing.

Group project? Sounds fun! Message me on here or MLPForums, or if you want my e-mail if that'll be more convenient for you.

Sorry, but all I can think of is the Holy Trinity. It's all I get when I look it up, too.

The last part was actually meant to show her love and overall importance he had in her life. He was buried next to Twilight, someone extremely important to her, and even years after he died, she still cries at his grave.

What hurts even more is that Stardust will never get to meet her father, and he'll just be another story her mother tells.

1706267 I'm excited about this project! Where do we start?

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