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well done the intro keeps the reader interested while ls adding abit of mystery to the mix, Very well done. You obviously put alot of time and effort into this and i give it a five.
P.S. Keep up the good work my friend. loved the ending to by the way 
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Oh God, I laughed so hard.
I concur with the above.
lol great story. i give you a 5. nicely done. and why is applejack displeased, she encouraged him to go earlier....... poor twilight
oh hey I read this awhile back! NOW WITH CLOP?! FUCK YEAH
also everyone above saying no, go buck yourselves
thesmokingjacket.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/03/i-fucking-love-cocaine.jpg and man is this story cocaine.
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soooooooo, that's a good thing?
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yes
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Sweet.
make more
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I do intend on writing more fics.
Nice story.... the most important question of all ... sequel?
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it's meant to be a oneshot.
I simply
it and i agree YOU DO need to write more
.Just a little bit less smoochy stuff.
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But smoochy stuff is sweet.
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i knowbut too much is not good. buti really liked it!
nvm, version better than devinatart because i cannot find deviartnart kthxbai.
I find that this shipping is wrong because Bon-Bon, after being seen sitting on a park bench with another mare, is clearly a lesbian. Any other views on the subject are inherently wrong. [/Sarcasm]
Seriously though, I enjoyed this.
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Oh thank God you specified that as sarcasm, cause I'd have to slap you.
4441937 I attempt to write my sarcasm as highly over-the-top, but most of the time people just treat me like an asshole, so I now specify sarcasm. Unfortunately, it doesn't travel well over the internet.
4441945
Well, it's kinda hard to determine whether something is sarcastic over text. Hence why specification is rather necessary.
4442105 I have a general rule that when something is super over the top like that, it's either stupidity or sarcasm.
Of course, many jump to the conclusion of stupidity.
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Yeah, it's sad.
4442105 Oh, just found "fone a simple resteraunt" should be "found"
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Ah screw it, too late for that now.
4442157 It's never too late to fix your mistakes.
Unless the mistake was nuking someone. Then you done goofed, and there aint no fixing that.
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Ah, this is two years old. Highly doubt more people will read it.
Surprised this many read it, considering that I pretty much stomped on one of the most popular shippings in this fandom.
4442177 You stomped on BoulderDash? You wot m8?
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Who the f-?
4442198 Ye dare question the sanctity of the love between Tom and Rainbow Dash? How dare thee!
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Ooooookaaaaaay
4442224 >Joking about the "most popular ship in the fandom"
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I bet