• Member Since 31st Jan, 2012
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SirNinji


-Comin' back on the rebound!- I'm the guy who specialises in Spike stories.

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(Formatting going underway. Sorry for any changes that may happen.)

After a long trek with his friends in the Everfree Forest looking for some rare flowers, Spike comes across a pond and decides to wash himself, which have been laced with Poison Joke petals. When Spike and his friends head to the Spa to cure him and Pinkie Pie of Poison Joke, Spike becomes aquaphobic. How will he ever cure himself if the only solution to Poison Joke is water?

Comments and Criticism are appreciated.

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 18 )

Well, well, well, you still aren't dead. This pleases me, and, if I dare presume.... THIS, will be fun. :pinkiehappy:

inb4 featured

I liked that refrence to "A Series of Unfortunate Events".

Do you remember when after Peewee hatched, Spike want to show his 'little bro' what it's like to be a pony?

So this thing has 180 votes and 4 comments, not to mention that it went from 145 votes to 180 in less than five minutes.

Something's fishy.

1485359 Shenanigans are being called.

1,289 views,
180 votes,
9 faves
and 4 comments before me.


Seems legit.

There are already screenshots, there's no point in changing the votes now, dude.

Damage's done

The formatting is painful to read - please format consistantly.

You also have some grammar issues: "Twilight does not know the forest very well, and got lost fairly quickly." shifts from present to past tense for no clear reason.

1485407 Thanks for pointing that out, I'll fix it soon.

And yes, I understand that foul play is afoot. It explains how I got featured again. :P

Wow, that's a lot of dislikes.
That's too bad.
But anyway, it's nice to see a new story.

1485727 My latest blog post explains that I've had a spam attack. The dislikes may be a result of that. I'm still looking into it. :unsuresweetie:

I think Rarity could have done a far better job of seducing Spike into the tub.

1489582 Meh, that's what I get for not being creative enough. :rainbowlaugh:

Reread & fix "Rarity would never call Spike a 'thing':facehoof: Darling, My Spikey, Dearest, But never thing. & If she danced for his spikey The poor drake would just faint dead away. :raritywink:(SPLASH) Nicely done otherwise, :twilightblush:

Real estate agents?

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