-Author's note- In this story everypony is humanised and the picture on the left describes what they look like including there keyblades btw the picture was made by BayneezOne on DeviantArt check out her art, it's pretty incredible.
-Story-
Xehanort(Young) is attempting to bring more worlds into sleep to try and corrode all worlds, it's now up to the 7 legendary keyblade wielders to stop him, but with Xehanort's time traveling powers he's not only revived the Kingdom Hearts Universes most terrible enemies, but he's also teamed up with two other familiar evil entities. Will the heroes save the day, or will they need help from five familiar faces? Find out in My Little Kingdom Hearts: Hearts Are Power!
Chapters (4)
it's Xehanort, not Xehinort
I think you mean corrupt or corrode
the 7 legendary keyblade wielders
1428369 Oh, you're right. Sorry about that.
1428373 Thank you good sir. I can't wait for everypony to see the next chapter! I'm giddy!
1428369 No, corrode was what I meant to say, even Sephiroth says it in FFVII the movie.
1428507 Sephiroth for the win.
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then correct the mistakes?
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I just want to add to DbzOrDie's comment, about fixing this issue. Get google chrome, because it does the same thing as microsoft word with the red squiggly line underneath a misspelled word. It does it for me, so I can only assume it does it for others.
-Freeze
1428559 Aw, yeah.
1428591 Already did. Thanks for letting me know, and if you see any more errors in the future please let me know.
1428601 I've been thinking about using that, because I usally do type my stories on Microsoft word, but I guess it doesn't pick up all of my mistakes. But thanks for the suggstion though.
1428990 You still have to change Xehinort and corroed (corrode)
1429668 Right, I thought I had corrected all of them but I completely forgot about the introdution. Heh, sorry about that.
good job man
1430363 Thanks!
1436249 Don't worry SPOILER ALERT!! Sora will make an appearance, along with the Mickey, Riku, Donald, and Goofy.
what about axle 1436645
yeah axel and roxas needs to be thar but to help ....... oh roxas is sora whatever but still just like the games good job man but is aqua going to be in this story ?
1437255 Roxas, not so much...but as for Lea, we'll see. Hint. Hint. Wink. Wink.
1436942 Lea just 'may' make an appearance. We'll soon see. :)
1437255 And as for Aqua, hmm... she may make a slight appearance, but it depends on how the story rolls.
Hey! This story seems to be going well so far! It does seem a little bit rushed, but you did well with the characterization and making the story feel natural to both the show and the video games.
Really the most noticeable problem is just a few minor editing errors:
In both of these, you might want to use 'their' not 'there'
I think that there's a word missing here.
I think the 'w' fell off of 'whole'
There doesn't need to be a space between 're' and 'aquainted'
Like I said, these are just minor problems and they're really easy to miss when you're editing. It sticks out to others only because they've never read it before.
Keep up the good work on this story! I'm excited to see what's going to happen next!
1525396 Thanks for the support, and thanks big time for pointing out the errors. All of them are fixed as as for the I’m not all that with magic line, I purposely put it like that. But anyway, please keep enjoying the story, and pointing out errors. Much love to the viewers.
sadly the harmony carrier would fit in perfectly with kingdom hearts
That Keyblade Looks badass!
Neku was a friend of sora in dream drop distance i think
This is off to a great start! I just have one question. Are they human right now or still in pony form?
WHOO! I'm so excited!
Wow! That Keyblade looks EPIC! And it can split into two halves?! I want one!
Neku has joined the fray! Update!
3609890 Human, they've been human from the start. Glad you're enjoying. I'll be coming off of Haiatus soon.