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Tirek has won, Equestria is in danger, the ponies are terrified. The god of light Primus cannot ignore this. Help is on the way. His sons will put an end to Tireka tyranny.

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It is very risky to send out the traitors; Sentinel Prime and The Fallen Prime ( Megatronus ) in this?

And Optimus is rightfully pissed at those two, and to never trust them.

I don't know what Primus and the other Primes are even thinking by doing this with those two sending them to Equestria to "save" it!?

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Good question. But we should not forget that Sentinel and Megatronus had the goal of reviving Cybertron and providing their people with a happy future. There is a piece of goodness in them.

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Even though that's going to cost Earth and Humanity?

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I meant they have a chance at redemption. To Primus, they look like rowdy teenagers who have the wrong idea of ​​what is good. Sentinel was one of the kindest Cybertronians, which can be easily understood from Optimus's upbringing. However, war can drive anyone to despair

Which, along with the rest of the Elements of Harmony, were imprisoned in the dungeon of Canterlot Castle, where they were tortured to this day. She was angry at the princesses and their weaknesses. Why didn't they kill Tirek during their first meeting? Why did they free Discord, who betrayed them? Why should ordinary ponies be responsible for all their mistakes?

Damn, harsh. But, very understandable.


It seems like Celestia's "precious little ponies" have finally started to hate her and the other princesses for their lazy-asses for not taking care of the returning villains themselves.

Their pacifist ways and too trusting of some of those un-remorseful villains and with Discord, and the weakness of over depending on five pony citizens and the most recent, BUT inexperienced alicorn as your star pupil for Equestria's "security".

Well, look how that turned out! :facehoof: :ajbemused:


You get what I'm saying?

*Grapple* angry cry was heard behind her, causing the mare to involuntarily turn back. Distracted from the road, Apple Bloom did not notice the root protruding from the ground. She stumbled, rolled a couple of meters through the mud, and crashed her head into a large cobblestone.

Managing to rise to her legs shaking from exhaustion, Apple Bloom silently stared at the stallion. Her head ached from the questions. Alicorn stallion? Didn't Miss Cheerilee say that only mares can be alicorns?

Even though there's no "official" alicorn stallions for no reason.

This still feels a bit sexist thinking, right?

"Are you still going to *stare* at me?"

Sentinel Prime was angry. One of the reasons was his transformation into an anthropomorphic horse with wings and a horn. Just the description of his new appearance disgusted the former Autobot leader. The horse was a more pitiful animal than people. In Sentinel's opinion, they were nothing more than dirty, stinking cattle who lacked the very concept of intelligence.

So instead of their Big Cybertronian bodies? You give them pony bodies?

You do realize that this "decision" will give them avery hard time to take on the gigantic and OP Tirek, right?

Because, what the heck's stopping Tirek from just taking their "magic" as well?

No offense, but it seems like you made Primus incompetently DIDN'T think this through!?


And about Sentinel, he is still a jerk to even animals like horses.

Even though that he's going to deal with actually sentient ponies and horses from Arabia that will be very insulted by this behavior?

She immediately grabbed Sentinel's waist in her arms, and tears of happiness flowed from her eyes. However, this behavior did not greatly please the modified Cybertronian, who already began to regret saving the little mare.

With this type of thinking, how would you even be "reformed"?

Celestia, Luna, and *Cadence* watched in horror at the carnage below the platform. The stranger pony, a unicorn, was able to single-handedly deal with every creature from Tartarus. The battle was so bloody that after five minutes the floor in the cave was already completely red and the limbs and organs of monsters lay around.

Huh?

Thought he will be a alicorn too, despite being a Ex-Prime?

Celestia couldn't give an exact answer. The unicorn was superior in physical strength to *all three alicorns* combined. However, in the depths of her consciousness, the white alicorn realized that this was not the limit of the stranger’s capabilities.

Thoughts that this will be better to put in.

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I will definitely do this when I am physically ready. Don't worry about Tirek. Do you think I just gave them a leadership matrix? Megatronus will fight mainly, and the other two will take care of the little things in the form of dragons.

Regarding Sentinel, did you really expect him to become good in one chapter?

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Hm? Strange... it said that Megatronus showed strength superior to Kresalis and Cadance, and not three alicorns

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I know, but who the heck is "Kresalis"?

And two; You do admit that The Fallen/Megatronus would have quite easily taken down all three alicorns if he wanted.

So I thought what I suggested was better?

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I meant Queen Chrysalis. In the Russian community, I still didn’t understand how to write her name correctly. And yes, I believe that Megatronus may well be superior in strength to all the princesses. But I don't want to shove this in the reader's face already in the first chapter.

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