Veteran Fanfic writer back in the game. I edit my own stuff, so patience please! I do crossovers, mostly DMC related, but there will be a mix. With some MLP originals too, of course. Happy reading!
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I understand that this former demon king OC will be a threat to both worlds.
But how does the multi-universe be in "danger"!?
Are you involving other crossovers at the finale?
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Hey there, thanks for leaving a comment!
I can't say too much without spoiling it, as all of that will be revealed as the story develops further on.
What I can say though about that though,
Is that it will be involving the OC former demon king Daemon, and a hidden layer to his ultimate plan
Daemon has a lot more planned than what he's saying
As for your final question, yes there there will be another crossover as it progresses
I promise, I mention the multiverse for a very good reason
Thanks again for leaving a comment, and I hope you enjoy the story :)
This got to be the second Vergil story i read on this site and i like it very much
😍
Haven't got to read this yet(but hoping I can real soon).
But its awesome there's another DMC/MLP fic.
If I may ask, is there any plans for Spike in this cool crossover too?
Well I'd say that's a pretty spectacular return, my guy! This story sure is starting off strong!
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Hey there, thanks so much.
I did notice how little DMC stuff were on here, and I do get it, DMC crossing over with MLP already sounds a bit strange by itself, but I was just so curious to see how it could possibly work.
I wasn't sure how this story would be received so I'm pretty happy that to hear that some people are enjoying it
~Darkslayer
11907447
Thanks you very much!
I didn't really think my return to writing would be a crossover quite like this tbh lol
But It makes me very glad to know that people are taking a liking to this story
I'm very happy to hear that this story kicked off well for ya
Definitely looking forward to hearing your future thoughts as the story goes along
Lots planned for this story that's for sure
~Darkslayer
Managed to start reading this.
Pretty nice descriptions and strong start.
And liked the little bit with Spike's interactinon with Vergil.
Finally catch up on this story.
Awesome there's another DMC/MLP story like I said before.
Is there any plans for Spike in this if I may ask?
Or could there be any ideas for him?
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Hey, great to hear you're caught up
Very glad to know you enjoyed it ^_^
For the beginning of the arc of the story, he'll play more of a supporting character role
I wouldn't say Spike is considered a main character in this story
But as the story goes on, and develops more, we will definitely be seeing more of him that's for sure.
While he isn't the main focus of the plot (Since I have a whole storyboard list of things planned)
What I can say is, that for all my stories,
every character that appears, will always have something to do with the story
In the long run or short run.
I hope that answers your question
Thank you for the interest in my story, and happy reading!
~Darkslayer
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So he's gonna end up sidelined/left out from what the Mane 6 get to do/see.
Oh..
Was hoping he's isn't stuck as a sidekick/only support that sits on the sidelines because he can't do what the "chosen ones"(Mane 6) can do.
Sorry on sounding iffy..
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No worries, I understand the concerns and doubt, especially if Spike is a favorite Character of yours.
I'm sure he gets sidelined a lot.
From what I've seen, such is the fate of some other characters in some stories, too.
Thus why I totally understand the doubt.
But as I said before he'll have his part to play in the story, even if it isn't right away.
Who knows, I may have more idea's for him as the story progresses.
I only have plot events up to 20 chapters noted down so far, and there's always room for improvement, and adjustment.
All I can really say, is stay tuned dear reader, and find out what happens.
Rest assured, I can say with confidence that Spike will not be forgotten about in the story, nor will Zecora.
Thank you for your interest in my story, and happy reading!
~Darkslayer
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Ok.
Wow, they wore him down pretty quick! The infectious friendliness of the girls really did a bang up job of getting Vergil to open up!
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Oh definitely
A friendship vibe so powerful, not even Vergil could comprehend the kindness lol
Glad to see another reader enjoying my story
Thanks for sharing your thoughts. I look forward to hearing more as the story continues to progress! ^_^
~Darkslayer
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Oh absolutely, big fan of DMC!
I really like your story, but I have a few questions about the further development of your book:
1. Will there be any Vergil moments from DMC Visions of V?
2. You said something about the multiverse. Will Vergil be from the DMC reboot (2013)? Maybe some other crossover with Sonic, Final Fantasy, Kingdom Hearts, Dragon Ball, Transformes, Mega Men. Although the latter may include more characters from the Capcom universe.
3.Will there be plot from IDW's MLP included in your story?
4.If there is a Mirror World saga, will the Vergil in this universe be Nelo Angelo or Corrupted Vergil?
5. Of course it's a strange question, but will Vergil have an internal demon called Hollow Vergil like in the reboot?
6. Will there be any techniques or weapons from DMC Peak of Combat (Even if it is DMC PoC 1.4) for Vergil (even if he has different clothes)?
7. Can you use fantasy ideas to develop a Vergili character? (in the first link about Vergil styles it is written in the commentary)
https://www.reddit.com/r/DevilMayCry/comments/eyf2mu/vergil_styles_idea/
https://www.reddit.com/r/DevilMayCry/comments/kj34wc/will_beowulf_be_replaced_with_these_gauntlets/#lightbox
https://www.reddit.com/r/DevilMayCry/comments/10ef9d6/vergil_mirage_spike_weapon_concept/
https://www.reddit.com/r/DevilMayCry/comments/iolmk4/devil_sword_vergil_needs_to_be_made_a_reality/
https://the-demonic-paradise.fandom.com/wiki/Devil_Sword_Vergil
https://the-demonic-paradise.fandom.com/wiki/Rebis
https://www.reddit.com/r/DevilMayCry/comments/11ls54m/devil_sword_vergil_is_a_thing_in_devil_may_cry/
8. Will we see V and Urizen?
9. Are you going to insert music into the chapters?
10. Will there be anything from the fan comic "When Demon Awake"?
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It’s okay, I myself plan to write a fanfic in the future with Human with Devilish Power from Devil May Cry in the world of My little pony. This is my inspiration from the fanfic Recursion Error. I encourage you to read this fanfic set in the Sonic Archie universe, where a human teenager gets powers from the DMC and does crazy things with them.
https://m.fanfiction.net/s/13573585/1/Recursion-Error
By the way, you can also read if you want how Vergil gets into the world of Monster Girl
https://www.wattpad.com/story/272006390-vergil%27s-irritation-rises
I'll think about what other questions or ideas to give you;)
11912767
Hey there!
While I do appreciate you're willingness to give me potential idea's (And I do appreciate them!)
I'm a pretty busy person, so I don't always have time to look over a lot of links
I'm afraid I can't answer all your questions at the moment because there are just so many.
I don't mind at all if people would like to give me idea's and such, I have no problems with that.
But I think it would be better to just PM me if you have idea's to share next time, friend.
That way the next chapter comments aren't overloaded (Like this one already is lol)
As I do prefer the comments to be full of honest thoughts and feedback
That being said though
Thank you for sharing all this with me. I can see you have a lot to pitch.
I will try to look them over whenever I have the time.
~Darkslayer
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And when it reaches that point, it will avoid the Power Ponies issue I pointed out?
Ok then, I will keep an eye out for the chapter then.
Pretty cool on what Spike said to Vergil helped out a bit.
Not liking that Spike missed out on the fight with Daemon's "prototype" while all 6 girls got to check it out though..
Just adds to the issue of the Mane 6 gets to see/do stuff but Spike misses out badly
Hopefully the ponies will get out of their fear funk soon before it bits them hard.
Kind of wonder what other "prototypes" is Daemon making.
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Respectfully, I can't speed up the plot just for Spike.
That would ruin the entire purpose of the story build-up.
Lots of plot progression, and world-building to do still, among other things.
Patience is a virtue 👍
That's all I can say.
All and all,
Thanks for checking out the new chapter!
~Darkslayer
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Though whats gonna make it up for him by the time the buildup does reach him? Regarding of what he misses out on what the Mane 6 get to see?
I am not saying like speeding up the plot for him, no.
Wow! That was a curveball I didn't see coming! Wonder just what you have in store for us! Great read, dude!
Here's an unexpected ending with a question about Verglia's reaction to what Celestia said. By the way, did you see my message that I sent you in a personal message?
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Yes, I just haven't been able to reply yet
Been busy with work, I'll check back later when I'm off
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Hey there, thanks a bunch!
I feel like this chapter could have been edited a bit better imo - though thats probably just me being picky with my writing
But I am super grateful to hear that this chapter was also received well (So far anyway lol)
Got plenty more twists and turns to unravel later down the line, as the plot, story and it's characters develop more
Always appreciate the feedback and thoughts
Thanks for being a loyal reader, I appreciate it.
~Darkslayer
I like this start. Let’s see where it goes
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Hey there
Thanks for checking out my story
Very glad that it was an enjoyable start for ya
Looking forward to hearing more as you go along
~Darkslayer
Oooh, Celestia knew Sparda huh? Very interesting.
I am glad to see a new chapter.
It makes alot of sense for Fluttershy to be really affected and horrified by the abomination that Daemon made.
Kind of heartwarming her friends comforted her(sad Spike didn't get to, rubbing it in he's not part of their bond..)
And interesting how Vergil told the Mane 6 that moment from his past that happened in his childhood. That moment in time is what lead him down a path that defined him today.
Disappointed Spike misses out from hearing it, it was really a important thing to hear that the Mane 6 got to learn.
That Ten-Thousand Deaths punishment happened to Daemon is sure a terrifying fate, though can horribly backfire if even ONE of the fragments' fates gets adverted.
Seeing how it mentioned that Sparda gave the ponies anti-demon weapons, I am gonna guess the Mane 6 will get them(really hoping Spike isn't gonna get left out from getting cool stuff to fight too as equals)
I really did not expect this got changed to season 6 and what happened in the Dragon Lands.
And surprised that Smolder showed up. Wonder how she and Spike gonna meet and interact?
(In fact I.. well ship those 2, lol). Hoping its gonna be alot of interactions and such.
11993656
Thanks for checking out my latest chapter
Glad you're enjoying it
While I appreciate you sharing you're thoughts about what happens in this story
I ask that next time you leave a comment
When talking to me about what happened,
Please cover the details of the chapter with a spoiler tag
Since the comments are seen in the chapter selection
I don't want my other readers to be spoiled before they open the chapter to read.
As for what happened in the dragon lands
That will be revealed in the opening of the next chapter.
I didn't include it in this chapter because the word count was already long
And it had been 3 months already and didn't wanna wait any longer to update lol
11993687
Wait, so cover the whole darn thing as Spoiler?
11993690
No not every single thing
Just the major details
Key words, that give out crucial details really.
You can leave you're thoughts on it open
This chapter is fine, you can leave it in here
I just wanted to humbly ask that of you now before the plot thickens
Because things are going to be picking up very soon
The next chapter in particular is going to be setting up a very important event that will be leading to the first major plot point of this story.
Thanks for understanding :)
11993692
Err...
Ok.?
11993694
For context
I've just seen people complain on other stories about readers saying too much and spoiling things in the comments
Some people can be pretty rude about it, too and I don't want the same thing to accidentally happen here on my story
That's the reason ask this.
11993708
Ok I guess.
Sorry.
11993714
No worries
I appreciate you understanding
So thank you!
God, that was so fucking raw!
11995214
Haha, yeah it was feels hour in this chapter, that's for sure.
With some cute in the mix too
Thanks so much!
I wanted to make sure I put maximum effort in this chapter, especially with my 3 month delay.
I'm very glad that it was worth the wait for you!
Thanks for continuing to follow my story
Always a pleasure to see familiar readers of mine check back in.
Looking forward to hearing more of your thoughts in the next one!
~Darkslayer
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Oh absolutely! You really have a way with words!