With the beginning of a new era, Chrysalis has begun to emerge from the shadows, awaiting her chance to get revenge on those who’ve wrong her. She has built her army from the ground up, watching for the last thousand years. From the First Changeling-Pony War, to Luna’s rebellion, to now, with the Dawn of Harmony, she realizes that her time is nigh or never.
For Blue Fang, just a mere recruit to her armies, this means that his life as a Kadet is over, and his life as a soldat had truly begun. Caught in the midst of the Second Changeling-Pony War, he does his best to survive, whilst keeping his friends as safe as he can.
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The wait is over. It is here, the official Blue Fang rewrite, Blue Fang, Reignited. I’ve kept this hidden for a while, but I’ve decided to stop kicking the can down the road.
For those returning and those new, I welcome you all to a retelling of my most cherished story I’ve told.
Where Headcanon Becomes Absurd and Canon Absurder
So far so good. It's already a huge improvement over the original BF story. The amount of description and detail shows that you're putting a lot of care attention into this story, and the characters here seem a bit more lively compared to last time.
Looking forward to seeing what else is new in this universe.
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Thanks Bez! Glad you like it so far!
Very good start laying out the our protagonists and back story quite nicely. Definitely an major improvement in the writing (obviously). And I'm not confused (+10 approve). I wonder what changes will follow to the original. All round a job well done. Can't wait for the next chapter.
I couldn't read it until this morning becuase when you posted it, it was somewhere around 11:00 pm my time and I had to go to bed. 😩
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Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed!
Ah, another great prologue. Now introducing the rest of our protagonists group and the name change of the red fanged brother. I kinda like what you did with Chryssy here she seems less of a tyrant and more of a mother or source of guidance. I don't have any reason to hate her, (YET). Just saying if Red fang and I where to swap places and blue fang decided to use me as a chew toy, the hive will start to learn my vast and colorful vocabulary of the Afrikaans language.
And on a final note me and my friend is playing Hearts of Iron IV and playing the Equestria at war mod. I'm playing the Changelings. It's must be a coincidence. Anyway enough from me, thanks for the chapter can't wait for the next one to drop.