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jewelstealer


I'm Jewel! I am not new to MLP but I am new to writing fanfiction for it. I am practicing my writing and am open to constructive criticism. Looking for a proofreader.

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After finding a mysterious pin in the apple orchard, Applejack starts to become overwhelmed by peculiar desires and sensations. She can't seem to remember how or when the sensations started all she knows is she will do anything to keep feeling them.

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Nice idea. I think it would be better if the Applejack's mental transformation was longer, but I don't know how to actually do that.

questions: how did Flithy Rich get find the pin? why was he trying to give it to Diamond Tiara? Did he know the effects?

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