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jewelstealer


I'm Jewel! I am not new to MLP but I am new to writing fanfiction for it. I am practicing my writing and am open to constructive criticism. Looking for a proofreader.

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A Pinkiedash story Inspired by season 7 episode 23 Secrets and Pies.
The following story contains mentions of eating disorders and self harm viewer discretion is advised.

Does Rainbow Dash really not like pie or is there something more going on than meets the eye? Sometimes problems aren't what you may think and sometimes they are not at all what you would expect. Rainbow Dash doesn't hate herself at least that's what she tells herself but it reality there is a lot going on with her and her eating habits. Maybe just maybe Rainbow Dash can get the help she needs from the most unexpected pony.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 7 )

This is really good so far excited to read more!!!

Haven't finished reading yet, but would like to suggest you go through and split up the dialogue so it's one speaker per paragraph. It'll be a lot easier for folks to read like that.

Comment posted by jewelstealer deleted March 2nd

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Thank you! This is my first time ever properly writing an mlp fanfic so I appreciate any feedback I get! :raritystarry:

Comment posted by jewelstealer deleted March 2nd

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Actually planned on doing that today I wrote this chapter last month and have been planning to revamp it! Might edit and rewrite a bit here and there as well! Thank you for the suggestion! :pinkiesmile:

i love this story sm i can’t wait to keep reading :twilightsmile:

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