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Matthais Unidostres


I am Matthais Unidostres, I'm a Christian and I love FanFiction!

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This story is a sequel to The Future Belongs to Our Generation!


Princess Twilight Sparkle has been banished into the twilight. Opaline Arcana has been imprisoned in Tartarus. The age of alicorn rule has ended. Now, Guard Captain Gallus must address the citizens of Equestria and inform them of the new dynasty that awaits them.

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OK, time to talk about how your entire story is incorrect and not accurate to G5 lor-nah, I’m just kidding. We’re not doing that anymore.

Instead I will say that this is an interesting set up to future events and curious to see how events proceed.

The battle hardened mare scowled, and she said bitterly, "I quit Gallus' Royal Guard."

I guess that whether Tempest agreed with Twilight's plan or not, she wasn't ready to help banish her.

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Fizzlepop is a bit of a blind loyalist, as will be fully explored in future stories.

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Well, once we finish the G 4.5 arc and get to the time skip and Sunny Starscout's era, those stories will have an AU tag.

This story disappointed me quite a lot. Twilight Sparkle's friends would do anything to get her back. They are infinitely loyal to her and would never leave her in exile. And in your fan fiction, it's just some kind of clowning. They recognize their best friend with whom they have been through fire and water banished for God knows how many years and will never see her again and simply answer: it's sad, but it was necessary.
I'm sorry, because of one mistake and misconception, such a drastic change in the attitude of friends towards her is easy... There are no words how bad it is

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Spoiler for my next story. Read at your own risk.
In the next story, it will be revealed that the Tree of Harmony pacified the other five Element Bearers' minds to be accepting of Twilight's banishment. Hence the foreshadowing at the end with those in the Crystal Empire.

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Seriously? Huh, I guess there’s some hypocrites in this world if the tree seriously used forced harmony and not be seen as a villain.

To be clear, no I don’t hate the idea. Quite the opposite actually.

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This will be explored at length in the next sequel story. And remember, the Tree did some terrible things to the Young Six in "What Lies Beneath". And these were children, so I'm just keeping the Tree in character.

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