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I like how you put the fear of The Walking Dead reference in there when it shows the video when the helicopter took. So far to me stories only missing love romance and maybe sex. But so far solid second chapter
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Thanks, appreciate that. I took heavy inspiration from Fear the Walking Dead, especially the first season. Romance will come later in the story, sex scenes are a maybe. Not sure yet.
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I kind of wish you put a few more seems like from fear The Walking Dead how everything starts slowly coming down and more videos from the police and police in riot gear with right Shields. But you still have very good solid chapters
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A good point, yet the police and military aren't gone yet, so there might just be a few scenes with them yet.
I really like this has great potential I hope you continue writing this
What you should do is search all the surrounding houses in your area no doubt you'll find a lot of canned items because a lot of people probably never made it home. But I wonder which of the one of the girls I'll try to make their moves on the two boys
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Not just canned goods, anything considered non perishable like boxes of pasta or bulk food. For when any of the girls hit on them, well that will be later, it'll be a surprise
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Thanks, glad you like it. Got no plans on leaving it incomplete, I know the pain of that happening and wanting it continued.
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Don't forget it said one in four American has a gun. I also hope they find some riot gear and right Shields like from The Walking Dead
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True, but I plan on making it a little more interesting than they just find a stash of perfectly serviceable semi automatics and enough ammo to take over a small country. Riot gear may come in to use, depends if they find any after all
At least none of the soldiers were perverts thinking they wouldget lucky one last time before they died
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Didn't want to do the standard "military is bad" in the story like alot of zombie apocalypse stories
So it stared it Cali oh God Hell-A is calling my name.
Rick Lee ken those three names sound very familiar one from a show and two from a video game.
Another fellow zombie fan... I shall give this a read!
I guess Samuel will be the father figure in her life and I guess one of the girls will be the mother figure in her life for her
And so it begins.
So far so good. Saw some mistakes like:
but other than that, keep up the good work!