Due to some particularly unpleasant events, Princess Twilight has to stay in the human world forever. After some time, they all get to know that Flash Sentry is a long lost prince. This shocks everyone, including Prince Flash himself.
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This is missing the "Everypony In Equestria Dies At the Very Beginning and Telling You So Isn't Even a Spoiler" tag.
"Slice of Life" 🤔
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Lol, and I'll remove the slice of life part-
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In the first chapter? They all die.
You should really add dark, horror, and tragedy to this.
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Is it that... creepy?
11751616
Now that I think about it, it's not really classic horror. Brutal yes, but not scary.
But, considering how you very visually described every pony and dragon's brutal deaths.
I don't think just having Gore and Death isn't enough for that. It is really dark and tragic from the very beginning.
You don't have to add the horror, because I changed my mind.
I'm surprised Twilight didn't have any "bad thoughts" to end her life, after what happened.
11751676
Second chapter. She wanted to commit suicide. But Luna, in her vision, asked her to continue her life and that she was ashamed that Twilight even thought about suicide.
11751676
All the chapters aren't really dark and tragic, I'm not gonna lie.
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Okay, but the first few chapters definitely are. And we can't ignore that.
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The first and second are. Won't lie. So is the 7th and 8th.
11752207
The 4th chapter, in no way, is tragic
11751475
11751616
The tragedy tag is for classical tragedies, not stories with tragic elements.
11757113
Is there even a difference?
Other stories put tragedy tags in their stories when something very horrible and tragic did happened.
11757133
I should remove the tragic tag then, right?
11758707
In my opinion, not really.