When Twilight ascended it was all smiles and happiness...
The change hit some of the Mane 6 harder than others, and care needs to be taken to prevent things going in a very dark direction.
Can Twilight get over body dysmorphia? Will Pinkie ever be able to close her eyes again? Can Rainbow Dash prevent a disaster?
Note: I owe a debt to another story for planting the seeds of this one https://www.fimfiction.net/story/248728/1/the-folly-of-celestia/she-doesnt-love-you
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Very nice.
Swat an Ursula Minor? That you could Twi, that you could, too bad I don't know what that is (it's called an "Ursa Minor", not "Ursula").
Sigh, It's always nice to see the girls when they're friends being, well, friends
Wonder what's wrong with Pinkie... oh well, guess I'll find out!
The "fretted" is capitalised, I don't think it should be.
There should be a comma after "moring" and now I'm hungry for cinnamon buns
Oh no, Pinkie, you're makin' me think about things which Twilicorn never originally made me think of...
Pinkie needs a hug, real bad.
Luna!! Hi, it's nice to see you, I just wish you hadn't brought up the whole alternate universe Twilight thing because that did not seem good.
Wow,that was really good! You described everypony's perspective on Twilight turning into an alicorn very well. I'm glad they were able to help Pinkie work through her issues and I agree with Applejack, Pinkie could use some therapy.
This is great and sketchy as hell. What really happened here? The expression of Twilights strange, churning thoughts was pungent.
Damn
Extra quotation marks
Flutter... shy shy? Extra shy there
Rainbow doesn't seem like the kind of pony to use the word "insinuated", I think just "Princess Luna told me that [...]" would do
Same, Dash, same.
Da guiding hoof waz Sunbutt
I think I'm being a little too nitpicky, but I think the word "whilst" is a little too formal for Twilight while just talking to RD
You should choose your own destiny you motherfucker! Just say no to Celestia! (I'm not against Twilicorn, but that's only because show Twilight doesn't have anything against it, this Twi does)
Little TwinkiePie friendshipping moments are always nice
Roll the credits
Sigh, you just had to ruin this for me, right? No offence, since I know we all have our own ships (I myself, am addicted to Twilight x Pinkie) but that was just out of nowhere, perhaps you could imply it more in previous chapters?
Speaking of those "heavenly voices that started playing," I for a split second thought Rainbow died and went to Heaven (please forgive me for that; It was 3:00 am the last time I read this)
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So far as I understand it, Rainbow Dash and Applejack are cannon. You might want to avoid "Applejack's First Crush" and the final chapter of "The Hidden Story", but I'm totally into that ship for FIM and Rarity & Applejack in EG.