• Published 20th Oct 2023
  • 361 Views, 6 Comments

Anon Is Missing: The Mystery of the Enormous Ladybug (Or, the Mystery of the Hotel Maid Who Danced on Flowers) - Mockingbirb



Anon vanishes from his bed, replaced by an enormous ladybug. Rarity and Spike investigate!

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Outtakes (Including at Least One Spoiler)

"Spikey-Wikey, please open the envelope, read my note aloud, and then show it to everypony."

Spike opened the envelope. "Plan: Annoy Starlight until she finally admits she did it, and she turns the giant bug back into Anon to avoid murder charges."

Comments ( 6 )
Majin Syeekoh
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Did you just include AO3 style tagging to fimfiction?

Not saying if it is or isn't but it would be good to add the story to the group if it is. :twilightsmile:

metamorphosis?!?!?

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Maybe that's a LITTLE BIT of a spoiler right there, idk?

Several times during this story, I completely forgot that Anon was in it, and I therefore love it. The detective work was a lot of fun too. ^^ Good luck in the contest!

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RB_ #6 · Nov 1st, 2023 · · ·

This story was a lot of fun! It hits the sweet spot of being random but not so random as to be nonsensical, which is rare, and I can appreciate that. I also really liked Plumeau. I do wish there had been a little more detective work, a little more meat on the bones, but overall this was very enjoyable. Good job!

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