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GoldenDoodle


Tabletop Nerd, Active Reader, and Metaphysician.

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“I already did, the only reason I told you my plan is because it’s already too late, you will take me from timeline to timeline only for me to consume them again and again. My entropy and darkness will be your new god .” She laughed sadistically as Dusk Shine squirmed in his restraints.

You Evil Bitch! You will fail horribly. :ajbemused:

As the mare tries to escape, Nightmare uses any means necessary to get her before she escapes, even if it means breaking time and space.

But isn’t Twilight male in this story?

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You're right. Male Counterpart; Dusk Shine.

The author made a slight mistake in the summary.

For those who want to see the full version of the cover pic, check out 3031314 on Derpi.

Why is this downvoted so much?

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People down vote darker subject material

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I hope this doesn't discourage your from writing more. Ignore the haters and write what you want!

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It doesn't discourage me, I write for my own gratification honestly :3

Thanks for the support.

I rather enjoyed the lead up to the main event in this story. Some great descriptive world building that really sucks you in.

I did feel the main event perse was a little rushed? Trying to get under a word count perhaps?

I'd really like to see what you do with this universe when unrestrained. I feel it could be quite interesting.

(Also there are a few times b you refer to Dusk as "she/her" and it can be a little confusing)

Regardless. This was good enough I'm going to look at your other works. Thank you!

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