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Taking Place before Twilight left Canterlot to Ponyville to meet her eventual friends, Twilight got a Special Present from her Teacher and Mentor, Princess Celestia, which was an Ancient book that features Ancient Spells, Twilight being very eager, decides to cast one of the spells, but in doing so, She let herself fall into a Trap that she wasn't sure she would be able to get out of with some grave dangers ahead.

Chapters (13)
Comments ( 16 )

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Indeed it is!
Finally I was WAITING FOR SOMETHING LIKE THIS
i await the next chapter

"What's that.....Crystal? I... I can't teleport across!"

"be warned this crystal contains magic similar to most nullifers used by prison guards"

"I mean, this particular spell that Twilight Sparkle had casted is a dangerous spell that teleports her into a mysterious dungeon that no pony has discovered from above, and no pony before had ever gotten out of"

Speaking of dangerous spells
I have one called Hel's Exlixr
Its EXTREMELY dangerous so I can't say what it does

I'm surprised that despite the good comments, no one has given it a like. Or is it disabled?

By the way, the story has a good basic idea.

"I hope I don't have to do anymore running, cause that was a traumatic experience"

Oh you just wait twilight
For those of us who know
ITS GONNA GET WORSE

and then there were two
TWO SURVIVORS LEFT

"No.... nopony has actually escaped this place, have they? And I'm the only one in here"

AND THEN THERE WAS ONE

and then there were none
Congratulations sparkle
You have survived

The run-on sentences are out of control in this story.

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